koi khwaab dasht-e-firaq main

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Ali_2 October 28, 2007, 7:45am 1

koi khwaab dasht-e-firaq main sare-e-sham chehra kusha huwa
meri chashm-e-tar main rukha nahi kay tha rutjagaoo ka dasa huwa

mery dil ko rakhta hai shadmaa’n, mery hont rakhta hai gulfasha’n
wohi ek lafz jo ap nay mery kaan main hai kaha huwa

hai nigah main meri aj tak woh nigah koi jhuki huwi
woh jo dehan tha kisi dehan main, wohi aj bhi hai laga huwa

meray rut jagaoo kay fashar main, meri khwahisho kay gubar main
wohi aik wada gulab sa sar-e-nakhal jaan hai khila huwa

teri chashm-e-khush ki pinah main kisi khwab zar ki rah main
mery gham ka chand tahar gya kay tha raat bhar ka thaka huwa

hai ye mukhtasir rah-e-ishq par, nahi ap hum rahay humsafar
to kis liye ye mubahisa, kaha! kon! kasay! juda huwa

kisi dil kusha si pukar say usi ek bad-e-bahar say
kahi barg barg namu mili, kahi zakhm zakhm hara huwa

tery shahr-e-adal say aj kya sabhi dard mand chalay gaye!
nahi kaghzi koi perhan, nahi hath koi utha huwa!

SJ October 28, 2007, 8:21am 2

Re: koi khwaab dasht-e-firaq main

Watch out, you might be next.

koi khwaab dasht-e-firaq main sare-e-sham chehra kusha huwa

meri chashm-e-tar main rukha nahi kay tha rutjagaoo ka dasa huwa

mery dil ko rakhta hai shadmaa’n, mery hont rakhta hai gulfasha’n
wohi ek lafz jo ap nay mery kaan main hai kaha huwa

hai nigah main meri aj tak woh nigah koi jhuki huwi
woh jo dehan tha kisi dehan main, wohi aj bhi hai laga huwa

meray rut jagaoo kay fashar main, meri khwahisho kay gubar main
wohi aik wada gulab sa sar-e-nakhal jaan hai khila huwa

teri chashm-e-khush ki pinah main kisi khwab zar ki rah main
mery gham ka chand tahar gya kay tha raat bhar ka thaka huwa

hai ye mukhtasir rah-e-ishq par, nahi ap hum rahay humsafar
to kis liye ye mubahisa, kaha! kon! kasay! juda huwa

kisi dil kusha si pukar say usi ek bad-e-bahar say
kahi barg barg namu mili, kahi zakhm zakhm hara huwa

tery shahr-e-adal say aj kya sabhi dard mand chalay gaye!

nahi kaghzi koi perhan, nahi hath koi utha huwa!

Amazing…
Bohat he umdaa Kalaam…Kis ka Hai:faizy:
Bohat he khoob Ghazal hai …har shair he Strong jZabaat ka ainaadaar hai…
Parh kar Acha laga:)

Ali_2 October 28, 2007, 8:50am 3

Re: koi khwaab dasht-e-firaq main

pata nahin kis ka hai

achi baat hai ke aap ko acha laga

NikamiJano October 29, 2007, 9:09pm 4

Re: koi khwaab dasht-e-firaq main

mery dil ko rakhta hai shadmaa'n, mery hont rakhta hai gulfasha'n
wohi ek lafz jo ap nay mery kaan main hai kaha huwa

hai nigah main meri aj tak woh nigah koi jhuki huwi
woh jo dehan tha kisi dehan main, wohi aj bhi hai laga huwa

v nice sharing Ali....hamiN b batian na kaan main kaha tha :p

Shab-e-Hijar October 29, 2007, 9:54pm 5

Re: koi khwaab dasht-e-firaq main

beautifulll sharing Ali :k:

Ali_2 October 30, 2007, 8:17am 6

Re: koi khwaab dasht-e-firaq main

ji zaroor

deadsoul October 30, 2007, 9:05am 7

Re: koi khwaab dasht-e-firaq main

nice

redidentity October 30, 2007, 9:25am 8

Re: koi khwaab dasht-e-firaq main

Buhat Khoob..

being_lonely October 30, 2007, 9:27am 9

Re: koi khwaab dasht-e-firaq main

:k: nice ali
waisay where is your enty in competition ?

NikamiJano October 30, 2007, 9:02pm 10

Re: koi khwaab dasht-e-firaq main

u know me nikami sun nahi sakti tu zara likh k bataiN na

Aryaan October 30, 2007, 9:19pm 11

Re: koi khwaab dasht-e-firaq main

Bohat hi khoob** Ali**..:k:

Ali_2 October 31, 2007, 7:54am 12

Re: koi khwaab dasht-e-firaq main

ab aap secret ko public main open karain gi

thanks All

Daanie November 1, 2007, 3:48am 13

Re: koi khwaab dasht-e-firaq main

buhut khoobsurat :)