** koi dewana kehta hay koi pagal samajhta hay magar dharti ki bechani ko bas badal samajhta hay main tujh se dur kesa hoo tu mujh se dur kesi hay ye tera dil samajhta hay ya mera dil samjhta hay
muhabbat aik ahsaso ki pavon si kahani hay kabhi kabirah dewana tha kabhi meera dewani hay yaha sab loog kehte hain meri ankho main ansoo hain jo tu samjhe to moti hain jo na samjhe to pani hay
samander peer ka andar hay lekin ro nahi sakta ye anso piyar ka moti hay isko kho nahi sakta meri chahat ko apna tu bana lena magar sun le jo mera ho nahi paya wo tera ho nahi sakta
bhramar koi ko mudni per machal betha to hangama hamare dil main koi khuwab pal betha to hangama abhi tak doob kar sunte the sab qissa muhabbat ka main qissay ko haqeeqat main badal betha to hangama**
**Hi suasshah,
aapne jis taraH likhaa hai vo Ghazal kii format hai magar yeh Ghazal nahiiN hai. yeh 4 different qit'aaat [singular: qit'a] which are 4-liners. pahle do misr'oN meN qaafiya/radeef hotaa hai jab k tessra misr'a aazaad hotaa hai magar chauthaa misr'a phir ek baar qaafiy/radeef se murass'a hotaa hai.
jaise maiN ne likhaa hai to ab aap dekh sakte haiN k chaaroN qit'aaat ke qawaafii/redeef alag alag haiN magar har qit'a paaband hai.
in qita'aat meN Hindi ke alfaaz kaafii use huye haiN jo kahiiN kahiiN saHeeH tareeqe se nahiiN likhe gaye is liye confusion hotaa hai paRhne meN...typos correct kar leN to lutf do-baalaa ho jaaye.
thank you for sharing**