Yaraan E Mahfil… Aadaab !
Yeh Nazm Aap Sab Ke Liye… Enjoy and Comment !!
--------- KOI … DASTAK ! ----------
Kamre Main Apne Leta Tha,
Yeh Sonchte Hue,
Kitni Haseen Chandni Raten Guzar Gayeen,
Nikla Jo Chand Raat Main,
Dil Doobne Laga,
Yeh Sonch Hi Raha Tha -
Ke Aahat Si Ek Hui…
Utthha Barha,
Kiwaar Ko Khola…
** Koi Na Thaa,**
Wapas Jo Ho Raha Tha,
To Mahsoos Yeh Hua -
DASTAK jo Thi,
**Woh DIL Ke Dharakne **
Ki Thi Sadaa !!!
Darwesh !
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Wah!
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I was in the room,
lying on my bed.
I was thinking how many beautiful
nights with full moons have passed,
and whenever the moon rose up in skies
my heart felt like drowning.
In the middle of these wanderings
I suddenly heard a noise.
I got up and
opened the door.
No one was there.
While getting back to bed
I realized what I heard -
My heart’s frantic beatings.
As always.
Note: Also posted at http://whitewings.sulekha.com/blog/post/2007/06/some-noise.htm
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Wah! kopra great 
**I have written my reaserch Paper about Faiz and add your Translations of his ghazals there that was help ful for me;Thanks You and Sannan who told me about ur work:rose: Great work. **
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^ research paper on fiaz 
u an urdu major or somthin?
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**Faiz talked about social injustice ap Faiz ky nazriyat ko manny sy inkar kar sakty hain magar os ki shairi sy nahi **
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soviet union gave him the award caz he was a communist… aur gori say shadi karna is the best thing
sorry yar derwesh… tumhari thread main hum nain apna daftar khol liya… wont flood no more
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For me yes
Darwesh Allah lok bandy hain unhi aytraz nahi ho ga waisy bhi Shaii ky thread main shair hi ki bat ho rahi hy:)
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**************** KOI BATLAYE KE HUM BATLAYEN KIYAAAA ? **************
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**************** KOI BATLAYE KE HUM BATLAYEN KIYAAAA ? **************
HUn ty Mods hi dasan gy tusi kuch na btlao ji:D
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Jigar Ravi,
G-N Saheba,
Jan Chacha Ghalib....... Aadaab,
Nawazish Karam..... Apki Mohabbat Hai Ke Main Ghoom Phir Kar is **
*Nukkar par aajaata hun...... *
**Meri Khuskismati hai, ke mere hawaley se aaplog apni baat duniya tak ponhcharahe hain....Cheers,
G-N ji, aapka Paper mujhe interesting lag raha hai, kabhi mood theek ho to uski details mujhe bataye ga, main shagird Numa hun, faidaa hi hoga....
Darwesh.
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Yaar Rkopra............ Zindabaad,
Sulekha par apni Nazm apki tarjumaani ke saath dekhi, itni original thi, ke laga main aapki poem parh raha hun.......... Aap samne hote to haath choom letaa,
Khuda apke Qalam ki Jawaani ko lambi umr de..... Bhai, Mazaa Agayaa,
Yaar yeh to bataiye, ke Yeh Nazmain aapko Kaisee Lageen ??
Darwesh.