koi aur

bunna jis ka khawab ajdaad nain wo tha gulistaan koi aur
iss baagh kay baasi koi aur hain tou nighebaaN koi aur

kal mehfil-e-sukhan main sub ush ush kartay reh gai
ghazal hamaari iss qabil kahan, ho ga deewaN koi aur

ishq kay khail main ye ajab dastoor hai
mehnat kary koi, to ho kamraaN koi aur

bohat mushkil hai insaan kay liye insaaf ka hasool
naai zameen darkaar hai, tou chahyey aasmaaN koi aur

akhbaar parh kay boly sub “darinday bastay hain yahan”
ghalib aap hi bataaeiN kay haiN ye haiwaaN koi aur

fil-haal ghalib takhallus istemaal kar raha hoon…
aur haiwaan say matlab haiwaan-e-nataq

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awwww…no1 posted in chacha g;s thread…

akhir bhateeji ko hi khaya aya na…:snooty:

wah wah wah…(even tho i barely understood it)

Re: koi aur

yaar Ghalib takhallus par Jumlaa huqooq mehfooz haiN.. Munaasib hotaa kaY aap koi aur takhallus istemaaL farmaa laitaY; misaaL kaY taur par:

ghaliban
ghalghala
ain ghain

waghaira waghaira

Re: koi aur

fikar nahin karin… ye temporary hai, abhi kal sha’eiri shroo ki hai.. koi aur dhoond lain gey

waisy ghalghala sounds nice :k:

Re: koi aur

thank you, thank you… :clown:

Re: koi aur

Kuch Samagh Nahi Ayee... Ghazal main rawani nahi hay..