koi ashaak phiR se sharaR bana koi zakham phiR se gulaab kaR

NikamiJano · November 23, 2002, 12:16pm

na sama’eytooN maiN tapash ghulaY na nazaR ko waqf-e-azab kaR
jo sunaie daY usaY chup sikha jo dekhie day usaY khawab kaR

abhi muntashiR na ho ajnabi na visal-e-rut k kaRam jataa
jo teRi talash maiN ghum huwaY kabhi un dino ka hisaab kaR

meRay sabaR peR koi ajaaR kia meRi dopahaR pe ye abaR keoN?
mujhaY Oo’ranaY daY ye azee’aateiN meRi adtaiN na khRab kaR

ye hajoom-e-shahaR sitam gara’N na sunay gha teRi sada kabhi
meRi hasratooN ko sukhaN suna meRi khaa’eshoN se khitaab kaR

ye jaloos-e-fasl-e-bahaR hai tahee dast yaaR saja isaY
koi ashaak phiR se sharaR bana koi zakham phiR se gulaab kaR

Jaan_Lewaa · November 23, 2002, 12:32pm

bhut achay:k:

Pramod · November 23, 2002, 12:42pm

abhi muntashiR na ho ajnabi na visal-e-rut k kaRam jataa
jo teRi talash maiN ghum huwaY kabhi un dino ka hisaab kaR

meRay sabaR peR koi ajaaR kia meRi dopahaR pe ye abaR keoN?
mujhaY Oo'ranaY daY ye azee'aateiN meRi adtaiN na khRab kaR

wah..kya kaheiN bahna..simply beautiful.
thanks for sharing.

chand_chehra · November 23, 2002, 1:56pm

Re: koi ashaak phiR se sharaR bana koi zakham phiR se gulaab kaR

woww very nice :k:

HeArT_HaCKeR · November 23, 2002, 4:00pm

Zabu10 :k:

Amal · November 23, 2002, 4:15pm

Re: koi ashaak phiR se sharaR bana koi zakham phiR se gulaab kaR

Beautiful…bohat hi khoob:k:…thanx for sharing NikamiJi

Dragon_King · November 23, 2002, 5:05pm

Nice :k:

Capricorn · November 23, 2002, 6:45pm

Buhat khoob nikii :k:

guybrush · November 23, 2002, 9:33pm

:k:

arifnawaz1 · November 23, 2002, 11:34pm

Its really wonderful...
Thanks for sharing !

Capricorn · November 24, 2002, 1:20am

Re: koi ashaak phiR se sharaR bana koi zakham phiR se gulaab kaR

I love this verse :k:

NikamiJano · November 24, 2002, 2:14pm

thanks jaanlawa...Pra g ..chando g....Hh...dragon bahi...(marey khoaf k)
guy...arif nawaz ..capo...and ....** Amal ** ...:)

ghazal_kisi_ke · November 25, 2002, 1:37am

Re: koi ashaak phiR se sharaR bana koi zakham phiR se gulaab kaR

na sama’eytooN maiN tapash ghulaY na nazaR ko waqf-e-azab kaR
jo sunaie daY usaY chup sikha jo dekhie day usaY khawab kaR

abhi muntashiR na ho ajnabi na visal-e-rut k kaRam jataa
jo teRi talash maiN ghum huwaY kabhi un dino ka hisaab kaR

meRay sabaR peR koi ajaaR kia meRi dopahaR pe ye abaR keoN?
mujhaY Oo’ranaY daY ye azee’aateiN meRi adtaiN na khRab kaR

ye hajoom-e-shahaR sitam gara’N na sunay gha teRi sada kabhi
meRi hasratooN ko sukhaN suna meRi khaa’eshoN se khitaab kaR

ye jaloos-e-fasl-e-bahaR hai tahee dast yaaR saja isaY
koi ashaak phiR se sharaR bana koi zakham phiR se gulaab kaR
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wow:k::k:beautiful

Khushee · November 25, 2002, 5:43am

very beautiful!!!............... bohot khoob......... love da choice of words....

Lamhay · November 25, 2002, 6:31am

bahut khoob nikami behen thanks 4 sharing!

ARSH · November 26, 2002, 2:08pm

mujhaY Oo'ranaY daY ye azee'aateiN meRi adtaiN na khRab kaR

yeh ishaQ ki beemaRi mairi gaiR mojodagi main kuch shidddat ikhtiyaaaaR kar gai lagti hai...:)

anyway nice & Lovely.....ghazaL...

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · November 26, 2002, 3:15pm

Be-Had Umda Thanks for sharing NJ sis:)

_Masoom_Muskaan · November 27, 2002, 11:38am

boht achei nikamije:)

NikamiJano · November 28, 2002, 1:31pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by ARSH: *
mujhaY Oo'ranaY daY ye azee'aateiN meRi adtaiN na khRab kaR

yeh ishaQ ki beemaRi mairi gaiR mojodagi main kuch shidddat ikhtiyaaaaR kar gai lagti hai...:)

anyway nice & Lovely.....ghazaL...
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tusi choR jo gaye tu kisi se tu dil lagana he tha na ;)
any way thanks 4 liking ma gazal..:)..and welcome back again

NikamiJano · November 28, 2002, 1:32pm

thanks gazal kisi ki Gul-e-Tea..lamhay sis and mashoom g ..:)