Tum jo itnay naraz ho
wajh tumhaiN maloom hay kiya
kay hum nay rabita kioN nahiN kiya
hum nay haal kioN nahiN poocha
tum jo naraz ho itnay
kiya tumhaiN maloom hay kay
hum pay kiya guzarti hay
jaab naraz koi dost hum say hota hay
Tum jo naraz ho itnay
kiya ya maloom hay tumhaiN
kay ankaiN ya kesay behtiN hainN
dard kitna hota hay is dill maiN humaray
tum jo udass ho itnay
kiya ya maloom hay tum ko kay
udassi ki ya sard shamaiN hum kesay tanha guzartaiN haiN
tum jo bhool rahay ho hum ko to
kiya ya maloom hay tum ko kay
hum nay judha kabhi bhi kisi say hona to na chaha magar
kooch qismat nay sath na diya kooch majbooriyaN an paRi
tum jo khamosh ho itnay
kiya ya maloom hay tumhaiN
ya khamoshi logooN ki kitna taRpati hay hum ko
kitna jalatai hay hum ko
kay hum andhar hi andhar ghoolay jataiN haiN
kiya ya maloom hay tumhaiN
humaray liya tumhari ahmeyat kiya hay
kitnay aziz ho hum ko tum
tum dost ho to dost hum ko jaan say apni
baaR kay aziz hotaiN haiN
kiya maloom hay tumhaiN
kay hum pay kiya guzar rahi hay
hum kis halat maiN haiN
Mout kay intazar maiN zindhagi say laaR kesay rahaiN haiN
kiya maloom hay tumhaiN
bolo
kiya maloom hay tumhaiN?
Tum jo itnay naraz ho
wajh tumhaiN maloom hay kiya
kay hum nay rabita kioN nahiN kiya
hum nay haal kioN nahiN poocha
tum jo naraz ho itnay
kiya tumhaiN maloom hay kay
hum pay kiya guzarti hay jaab naraz koi dost hum say hota hay
Tum jo naraz ho itnay
kiya ya maloom hay tumhaiN
kay ankaiN ya kesay behtiN hainN
dard kitna hota hay is dill maiN humaray
tum jo udass ho itnay
kiya ya maloom hay tum ko kay
udassi ki ya sard shamaiN hum kesay tanha guzartaiN haiN
tum jo bhool rahay ho hum ko to
kiya ya maloom hay tum ko kay
hum nay judha kabhi bhi kisi say hona to na chaha magar
kooch qismat nay sath na diya kooch majbooriyaN an paRi
tum jo khamosh ho itnay
kiya ya maloom hay tumhaiN ya khamoshi logooN ki kitna taRpati hay hum ko
kitna jalatai hay hum ko
kay hum andhar hi andhar ghoolay jataiN haiN
kiya ya maloom hay tumhaiN
humaray liya tumhari ahmeyat kiya hay
kitnay aziz ho hum ko tum tum dost ho to dost hum ko jaan say apni
baaR kay aziz hotaiN haiN
kiya maloom hay tumhaiN
kay hum pay kiya guzar rahi hay
hum kis halat maiN haiN
Mout kay intazar maiN zindhagi say laaR kesay rahaiN haiN
kiya maloom hay tumhaiN
bolo
kiya maloom hay tumhaiN?
By Subha.
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Swera jee bohat khubsurat poem hey, bas ager subject key yani :aik dost ju naraz hey" us key uper tennun bold lines bhi rehti to bohat powerful expression ho jata. thts wt i think, u have all the rights to disagree...:) anyways thankyou somuch for sharing a beautiful poem with us.
Swera jee bohat khubsurat poem hey, bas ager subject key yani :aik dost ju naraz hey" us key uper tennun bold lines bhi rehti to bohat powerful expression ho jata. thts wt i think, u have all the rights to disagree...:) anyways thankyou somuch for sharing a beautiful poem with us.
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Tell u the truth jaldi thi mujhay post karnay ki:(
& thanks for liking…….
nice poem… thanx 4 sharing and wuh dost jo naraz hain aap sey main request karon ga keh raazi ho jaoo i don’t know abt that person other wise main personaly request karta us sey
Tell u the truth jaldi thi mujhay post karnay ki:(
& thanks for liking…….
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jeee ha, aisye bhi hpota hay aksar merey saath bhi, n btw i hope aap ka naraz dost maan gya ho ga nahien tu ab ussey yeh gana sunayein.. Roothey ho tum tum ko keisey manayoon pia... bolo na bolo na...khusbu ban key ayooon, dherkan maien bas jayoon, keisey tum ko manayooon...:)
and dont worry sab theek ho jaye ga, narazgi bhi udher hi hoti hay na jhaan pyaar hota hay...:)