Kiya jawab doon.....

Dilsay · March 9, 2003, 7:11pm

**Sub poochtay hain tara
Kiya jawab doon
Jagatay chand ko kiya jawab doon
Tim timatay sataroon ko kiya jawab doon
Soun san rastoon ko kiya jawab doon
Sookhay patoon ko kiya jawab doon
Sard hawaoon ko kiya jawab doon
Jagteen ratoon ko kiya jawab doon
Bakhray howay khawaboon ko kiya jawab doon
Rooktee howee sansoon ko kiya jawab doon
Zamanay ka sawaloon ka kiya jawab doon
Sub poochtay hain tara
Kiya jawab doon

Kah doon ka tum nay
Choor diya hi mujahay
Kah doon ka tum nay
Toor diya hai mujahay
Magar kasay
Meri jaan mujahay bata
Kiya jawab doon
**

by Dilsay

system · March 9, 2003, 7:36pm

Bohat Khoob, :k::k: bohat khoobsurat andaaz hai aap ka :k:

Amal · March 9, 2003, 7:39pm

Re: Kiya jawab doon…

Beautifully written:k:…keep it up Dilsay

ghazal_kisi_ke · March 9, 2003, 9:15pm

Re: Kiya jawab doon…

i’m speechless:k::k::k::k:
thanks alot for sharing:flower1:
itne udasse ache nahi:(
keep writing:)

Dilsay · March 10, 2003, 5:18am

Thanks Viv
Amal thanks a lot
GKK udasi naseeb hai thanks

weteyes82 · March 10, 2003, 6:02am

[QUOTE]
Kah doon ka tum nay
Choor diya hi mujahay
Kah doon ka tum nay
Toor diya hai mujahay
Magar kasay
Meri jaan mujahay bata
Kiya jawab doon
[/QUOTE]

beautiful dilsay...sighz on the last part..really gr8..no words for that.

Dilsay · March 10, 2003, 9:32am

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*Originally posted by weteyes82: *

beautiful dilsay...sighz on the last part..really gr8..no words for that.
[/QUOTE]

Thanks

BrokenSky · March 10, 2003, 12:30pm

Great:k:…

Swera · March 10, 2003, 2:20pm

very good

Lamhay · March 10, 2003, 2:22pm

bahut khoob dilsay ji , per itni udaasi achi nahin !

Dilsay · March 10, 2003, 5:55pm

Thanks

Lamhay
Sewra
BrokenSky

aadhoorighazal · March 10, 2003, 11:21pm

saf saf bata dain !!!!! kub tek chupa'ain gae..............

Come on Dilsay, come back in spirits.....zindagee tu chaltee hi rehtee hai na...........

Dilsay · March 11, 2003, 5:23am

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by aadhoorighazal: *
saf saf bata dain !!!!! kub tek chupa'ain gae..............

Come on Dilsay, come back in spirits.....zindagee tu chaltee hi rehtee hai na...........
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Itna asan nahi jitna nazar ata hai....

ghazal_kisi_ke · March 11, 2003, 7:56pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Dilsay: *

Itna asan nahi jitna nazar ata hai....
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her kaam muskel nazar ata hai per hota nahi hai:~)

chand_chehra · March 11, 2003, 10:37pm

Nice1:k: keep it up

Koyal · March 11, 2003, 11:15pm

Re: Kiya jawab doon…

nice one dilse…:k:

p:s ..wesay haar baat ka jawab nahi hota..

Dilsay · March 12, 2003, 5:07pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by ghazal kisi ke: *

her kaam muskel nazar ata hai per hota nahi hai:~)
[/QUOTE]

jaab us nay kuch na soonanay ke kasam khaee hoo tu phir koyee kiya karay

Dilsay · March 12, 2003, 5:08pm

Re: Re: Kiya jawab doon…

hota hai magar maray pass nahi hai…

Dilsay · March 12, 2003, 5:10pm

Thanks

Man_de_Mouj · March 12, 2003, 6:47pm

Re: Kiya jawab doon.....

yar ab etnee khubsurat nazam kay baray main kia likhoun...alfaaz hi naheen ......... simply suberb.....