KIYA HO GA?

koe jo husn-e- khiyal ka tabina sitara hey kaheen
teiree rahguzr per manzil, wohh kon khera ho ga?

jis per tu bhee mer miteye, aye dil, wohh ze-rooh
teiree justajoo ka lasani angan, wohh kon ho ga?

yeye zabt-e-lau ka janoon heye abhi, na raha tow
teiree nazr meye saman, wohh sheks kiya ho ga?

na janeye tu bhee ager apneye dil ka khiyal, aye dil
teiree bujhee sooret ka, mustakbil aur hal kiya ho ga?

best,
Dushwari

Re: KIYA HO GA?

Dush ho reh Ga kuch na kuch ..... no worries :LB:

Re: KIYA HO GA?

shah jee, meye apni baat nahi ker rahee.. dhuleye miyaan kee baat ker rahee hoon.

Re: KIYA HO GA?

its very nice but there's a bit lack of rhythm....but overall impact is good.

Re: KIYA HO GA?

thanks abeeha. there is a spelling mistake too. tabinda instead of tabina.