salam Shazia,
i raed ur nazam. achhi koshish hai. mere Khayaal se kalaam meN "sinf" [gender] ayaaN nahiiN honaa chaahiye is liye kam se kam miaN to parhez kartaa huN. maiN kaa lafz jahaaN aayegaa urdu meN usse verb ke zariye gender ka pataa chal jaayegaa jaise kahna k:
maiN nahiiN maantii yaa maiN nahiiN maantaa
isse se gender saaf numaayaaN hai. agar is maiN ko "ham se" badal diyaa jaaye to universality bhi aa jaayegii statement meN aur gender bhi uncognizable hogaa yani yuN kahna k:
ham nahiiN maante :)
aap agar urdu vocab apnii baRhaayeN to shaairi meN nikhaar aa jaayegaa. u used a good word...nehaj :) good <!--Session data-->
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