Kiun tann pe dhooni rmaa k wo
Ik jogi bana deewana hua
Wo chaal baiganon wali thi
Phir kis nehaj ka parwana hua
Mai shayad pagal sodai
Jo her jag be-thikana hua
Kia main bhi saadhoo jogi hoon
Na janoon kis ka rogi hoon
Maot bhi ai to kaise ai
Keh mujhko jeene ka bahana na mila
Ye kia khumari hai charon taraf
Keh koi zi-rooh be-hosh nhin
Sab jante hain farana hain
Per zahiri tan-o-tosh nhin
Gar koi waqt ka ameer nhin
To kis karoon ka khazana hua
Na jane wo to pagal hai
Ye rasta hai k manzil hai
Phir!
Kiun tann pe dhooni rma k wo
Ik jogi bana deewana hua…
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Shazia you seems to be a professional person
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a cool stuff
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thanku sannan & gypsi, i had been english poetess bt my sis encouraged me 2 write in urdu & with the love and apreciation of you ppl i became more gud.
Urdu jaisi mithaas aur dard kisi aur zubaan mein kahaan, Shaiza aap urdu mein bhi likha kijiye..:k:
sorry to ask but What does it mean in english?
“If you can’t feed a hundred people, then just feed one.”
“We can do no great things, only small things with great love.”
Inspirational Quotes by Mother Teresa, 1910-1997, Albanian-born Humanitarian and Missionary
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thanku aryaan & morgan, english means i hve written a buk of english poetry by the name of REVERY. soon i'll post a poem frm it.
thanku sannan & gypsi, i had been english poetess bt my sis encouraged me 2 write in urdu & with the love and apreciation of you ppl i became more gud.
*Thats great, you can share your English poetry as well ... *
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inshallah i will.
Shazia, we look forward on your poetry english version…
“If you can’t feed a hundred people, then just feed one.”
“We can do no great things, only small things with great love.”
Inspirational Quotes by Mother Teresa, 1910-1997, Albanian-born Humanitarian and Missionary
yeh kon si zaban hay
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yeh urdu hai jise english main likha gya hai.
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salam Shazia,
i raed ur nazam. achhi koshish hai. mere Khayaal se kalaam meN "sinf" [gender] ayaaN nahiiN honaa chaahiye is liye kam se kam miaN to parhez kartaa huN. maiN kaa lafz jahaaN aayegaa urdu meN usse verb ke zariye gender ka pataa chal jaayegaa jaise kahna k:
maiN nahiiN maantii yaa maiN nahiiN maantaa
isse se gender saaf numaayaaN hai. agar is maiN ko "ham se" badal diyaa jaaye to universality bhi aa jaayegii statement meN aur gender bhi uncognizable hogaa yani yuN kahna k:
ham nahiiN maante :)
aap agar urdu vocab apnii baRhaayeN to shaairi meN nikhaar aa jaayegaa. u used a good word...nehaj :) good
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thank u hashmat, next time i'll b careful.
salam Shazia,
i raed ur nazam. achhi koshish hai. mere Khayaal se kalaam meN "sinf" [gender] ayaaN nahiiN honaa chaahiye is liye kam se kam miaN to parhez kartaa huN. maiN kaa lafz jahaaN aayegaa urdu meN usse verb ke zariye gender ka pataa chal jaayegaa jaise kahna k:
maiN nahiiN maantii yaa maiN nahiiN maantaa
isse se gender saaf numaayaaN hai. agar is maiN ko "ham se" badal diyaa jaaye to universality bhi aa jaayegii statement meN aur gender bhi uncognizable hogaa yani yuN kahna k:
ham nahiiN maante :)
aap agar urdu vocab apnii baRhaayeN to shaairi meN nikhaar aa jaayegaa. u used a good word...nehaj :) good <!--Session data-->
I think u r a teacher good i like it