Kitni pyari

Another one of my attempts, let me know what you guys think.

Lafzon mein beyan nahi kar sakta ke tum mujhe kitni pyari lagti ho
Hansti ho to mera bhi hansne ko dil karta hai

Roti ho to mera bhi rone ko dil karta hai
Udaas hoti ho to mein bhi udaas ho jata hoon

Kareeb aati ho toh dil ruk jaata hai
Door hoti ho toh dil bechein ho jata hai

Baat karti ho to moun mein ilfaz khatam ho jaate hain
Nahi karti to laakhon baatein lab pe aajaati hain

Muskura ke dekhti ho to taangein kamzor par jaati hain
Nahi dekhti to aankhein tera chehra dhoondti hain

Nazrein milaati ho to dil karta hai saari umer mili rahein
Nazrein neechi karti ho to tujhe choomne ko dil karta hai

Haath mein haath daalti ho to moun laal garam ho jaata hai
Chorti ho tumhare peeche aane ko dil karta hai

Baal khilaarti ho to un mein gum ho jaane ko dil karta hai
Door hoti ho to gala khushk ho jaata hai

Chalti ho to qiyamat aa jaati hai
Rukti ho to kareeb aane ko dil karta hai

Tumhe koi pyaar bhari nazroon se dhekle to ghusa aa jaata hai
Hume dekho pyaar se to dil pighal jaata hai

Rhus jaati ho to apne aap ko maarne ko dil karta hai
Khus hoti to duniya mein sab kuch bhool jaata hai

Tumhara phone aata hai to aur kuch sunai nahi deta
Phone band karti ho to aur kuch karne ko dil nahi karta

Tumhe takleef mein humse dekha bilkul nahi jaata
Tumhari khushi ki khatir sab khusiyan chor sakte hain hum

Dost se bolti ho to woh dushman ho jaata hai
Humse bolti ho maza aa jaata hai

Soti hui kitni sunder lagti ho tum
Jaagti ho dil karta hai dubara so jayo

Ghuse se bolti ho to pasand bilkul nahi aata
Khus ho kar bolti ho to dil karta hai bolti raho

Allah na kare tum kisi aur ki ho jayo
Kaash tumhe pata chal jaye hum tumse kitna pyar karte hain

-wmc

Re: Kitni pyari

Joo aadhoori reeh gaayi thi kaahani sochna
Beth ker tanha faqat baatein purani sochna

Jab kisi sahil pe aajaye meri yaad tumhain
Kyun jazeeron ki taraf rehta hai paani sochna

Tum agar bicharne per Khush ho to yun hi sahi
Beth ker tanha faqat shaamein purani sochna

Jab kabhi likhna kahani zeest ke mauzu pe tum
Kyun badal jaate hain lafzon ke maa'yne sochna.

wow u are next level :)

Good khayal. :)

Just organize the words and it seems it is nasar (text), rather than poetry.

Didn't get that word 'khilaarti'.