kitni mushkil se bani thi dil ki kainaat na pooch

WiseGuy · April 15, 2004, 1:31pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Koyal: *

koun iss tashnagi e rooh o badan ko samjhay beech sahra mein khara hoo kay samandar daikhoon [/QUOTE] Mujh ko paana hai tou phir mujh maiN utar ker dekho Yuun kinaaray say samandar naheeN dekha jaata

Thanks Chando Jee.

Koyal · April 19, 2004, 12:49am

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by WiseGuy: *
Mujh ko paana hai tou phir mujh maiN utar ker dekho
Yuun kinaaray say samandar naheeN dekha jaata

Thanks Chando Jee. [/QUOTE]

doob jaa'ey kisi dar'yaa maiN wo badal yaa Rub
jis ne barsooN meray sehraa ko tar'saaya hai
ja palat ja gham-e-dooraaN nahi fursat muj ko
aaj aik bholnay wala mujhay yaad aa'ya hia

:-| and ye chandu ka keon thanks *

WiseGuy · April 19, 2004, 4:05pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Koyal: *

doob jaa'ey kisi dar'yaa maiN wo badal yaa Rub
jis ne barsooN meray sehraa ko tar'saaya hai
ja palat ja gham-e-dooraaN nahi fursat muj ko
aaj aik bholnay wala mujhay yaad aa'ya hia

:-| and ye chandu ka keon thanks *
[/QUOTE]

Kyun baichaiN hooN maiN kyun araam nahi hai
Kitaab e zeest maiN ab woh naam nahi hai

Kuch is tarha say ankhaiN churaata hai ajkal
Jaisay us kee ankhoN maiN khuwaab nahi haiN.

Chandoo jee nay yeh shair post kia tha kisi thread main waheen say liya, isi liay shukriya bhi ada ker diya. :p

Koyal · April 24, 2004, 2:20pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by WiseGuy: *

Kyun baichaiN hooN maiN kyun araam nahi hai
Kitaab e zeest maiN ab woh naam nahi hai

Kuch is tarha say ankhaiN churaata hai ajkal
Jaisay us kee ankhoN maiN khuwaab nahi haiN.

[/QUOTE]

yuuN huwa taqseem meri khawaishooN ka aasmaa'N
chaand idher ko a gaya hai aur sitara us taraf
ho chukay gurqaab meray khawab jis manjdhaar maiN
khul raha hia baadbaaN-e-dil dobara us taraf

WiseGuy · April 25, 2004, 3:06pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Koyal: *

yuuN huwa taqseem meri khawaishooN ka aasmaa'N
chaand idher ko a gaya hai aur sitara us taraf
ho chukay gurqaab meray khawab jis manjdhaar maiN
khul raha hia baadbaaN-e-dil dobara us taraf
[/QUOTE]
Saahil dikhaa, Khuda! yaa safeena Dubo hee day
Kab tak hawa say mahv-e-jadal baadbaaN rahay!
Kia ishq hai yahi keh rahay woh sitam zareef
Aur meray lab pay naala-o-aah-o-fuGhaaN rahay?

Koyal · April 26, 2004, 12:40am

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by WiseGuy: *
Saahil dikhaa, Khuda! yaa safeena Dubo hee day
Kab tak hawa say mahv-e-jadal baadbaaN rahay!
Kia ishq hai yahi keh rahay woh sitam zareef
Aur meray lab pay naala-o-aah-o-fuGhaaN rahay?
[/QUOTE]

jawahar ka nikharna tu musahib maiN he mumkiN hai
ujaalooN maiN nahi hoti chiraagooN ki paazeeraa'ee

Zakhmi_Umar · April 26, 2004, 5:10am

very nice :k:

Azad · April 26, 2004, 7:09am

hummm kicks dil ki qaynaat. chalain phir say banain.

Azad · April 26, 2004, 7:11am

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Koyal: *

yuuN huwa taqseem meri khawaishooN ka aasmaa'N
chaand idher ko a gaya hai aur sitara us taraf
ho chukay gurqaab meray khawab jis manjdhaar maiN
khul raha hia baadbaaN-e-dil dobara us taraf
[/QUOTE]

hummm baadbaaN-e-Dil

Rukhsarbibi · April 26, 2004, 10:15pm

wah wah :k:

omaira · April 27, 2004, 1:46am

that is a wonderful poem... good job yaar...

Koyal · April 27, 2004, 2:50am

thanks lakin ap ka jawab-e-sher kahan hia..:)…long time no see..

Koyal · April 27, 2004, 2:50am

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Azad: *
hummm kicks dil ki qaynaat. chalain phir say banain.
[/QUOTE]

acha kia marbal buy kar lea jo shoro kaen phir se :)

Koyal · April 27, 2004, 2:51am

thanks bibi but why :(…???

Koyal · April 27, 2004, 2:53am

thanks bibi but why .. ???

Zakhmi_Umar · April 27, 2004, 5:13am

how r u ?

jawab-e-sher

aaj kal koi sher wher nahi , m busy these days

ok i will try to find some good sher

Miss_Choudary · April 27, 2004, 9:23am

Re: kitni mushkil se bani thi dil ki kainaat na pooch

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Koyal: *

kitni mushkil se kati kal ki meri raat na pooch
dil se nikli hoee honton me dabee baat na pooch

mein jis ke waastay lar jaaon is khudae se
mujhay khud se hai pyaari yeh kis ki zaat na pooch

wo kis ada se mere saamnay se guzraa abhi
kis tarhan meinay sambhaly mere jazbaat na pooch

waqat jo badlay to insaan badal jaatay hain
kya nahi dikhlaatay yeh gardish-e-halaa na pooch

wo kisi ka ho bhi gaya or mujhay khabar na hoe
kis tarhan usnay churaya hai mujh se haath na pooch

Is tarhan pal mein mujhay begana kar diya usnay
Kis tarhan apno se khaee hai me nay maat na pooch

ab tera pyaar nahi hai to sanam kuch bhi nahi
kitni mushkil se bani thi dil ki kainaat na pooch
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:( achi hai..aur sachi bhi...

WiseGuy · April 27, 2004, 2:21pm

Re: Re: kitni mushkil se bani thi dil ki kainaat na pooch

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Miss Choudary: *

:( achi hai..aur sachi bhi...
[/QUOTE]

Haan achi hai but hum log shair ka reply shair say kertay, aap bhi keejeay na. :)

WiseGuy · April 29, 2004, 3:11am

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Koyal: *

jawahar ka nikharna tu musahib maiN he mumkiN hai
ujaalooN maiN nahi hoti chiraagooN ki paazeeraa'ee
[/QUOTE]
Na jaanay kyuN usay dil meharbaaN samajhta hai
Woh dost hai to bas itna keh ajnabi kam hai

ghazal_kisi_ke · April 29, 2004, 3:38am

*wo zabat na kaR paien gain ankhooN k samandaR tum raah guzaroON se meRa zikeR na karna phoOloN k nashamaN maiN raha hOon maiN sada saY dekho kabhi khaaRoOn se mera zikar na kaRna*

waise awesome work everyone:k: :k: