Kitni Mohabat Hum Karne lage

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Tum Par Ham Marne Lage
Judai Se Hum Darne Lage
Tumhare Samne Bata Nahi Sakte

To Tanhai Me Ankhen Bharnelage
Tum Beshak Kuch Na Kaho

Hum Nazre Tumhari Parne Lage
Tumne Hampar Ek Nazar Jo

Dali Log Humse Jalne Lage
Ab Tum Khud Hi Dekhlo Tumse

Kitni Mohabat Hum Karne lage

For Special one :french:

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nice

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nice :)

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:)

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thanks for sharing :k:

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Re: Kitni Mohabat Hum Karne lage

Theme is good …but in middle you lost the rythm..

Ab Tum Khud Hi Dekhlo Tumse Tum is replica..

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umm nice :k:

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Re: Re: Kitni Mohabat Hum Karne lage

khuda key bandey jaisey poet ney likhi aisey hi post karney ko mangta hai na warna poet ki rooh tarpti rehti hai

apna mashwara paas rakhney ka kiya :french:

chal nikal ley chupkey sey :smiley:

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hehehehehe thx suraj jee :)

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Re: Re: Re: Kitni Mohabat Hum Karne lage

teri aghar naak peechay luggi ho aur ankh mathay per tuo meri rooh tuo cheekhaain maray gee na dur kay kay nahi..kiya bolta ray.. :biggthumb

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kaka terey mein akal ki kami hai pehlye mainey jo baat kahi us ko follow kar samjha bacha jamoora keh poet jo likht ahai us mein change karna qanoonan jurm hai

dosra shaair ki poetry ka naak our aankh sey koi taluq nahi :french:

3rd khuda sey behtar koi nahi janta u sney naak aankh jahan lagaani hai waheen lgaye ga terey jaisey namrood mashwrey paas rakheen :smiley:

4th jahan tak meri soorat ka hai meri pic ghalti sey bhi teri mehbooba ney dekh li tu ik dam marey gi apun par phir theek sey tarpey gi teri rooh ardili kaheen ka

abhi mach mach band kar our phir sey yeh poem parh our akal mei n dalney ka mangta hai samjha

bacha jamoora ghoom ja :d:rotato:

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Kaka Azad nay sahi kaha hai.. Kama Suthra tape shairi nahi mungta main.. :bhangra: