Kitni azziyat se....!

abeeha · April 5, 2008, 1:35pm

***Kitni Azziyat Say Uss Ne Mujh Ko Bhulaaya Hoga
Meri Yadoon Ne Ussay Khoob Rulaaya Hoga

Baat Be-Baat Aankh Uss Ki Jo Chhalkee Hogi
Uss Ne Chehre Ko Baazuon Main Chupaaya Hoga

Socha Ho Ga Uss Ne Din Main Kaee Baar Mujhay
Naam Hatheli Par Bhi Likh Likh Kay Mitaaya Hoga

Jahan Uss Nay Mera Zikkr Suna Hoga Kisi Say
Uss Ki Aankhon Main Koi Aansoo Tou Aaya Hoga

Raat Ke Bheetnay Tak Neend Na Aai Hogi Tujhay
Tunay Takkiye Ko Bhi Seenay Se Lagaaya Hoga

Hokay Nidhaal Meri Yadoon Se Tunay Jaana
Meri Tasveer Pe Sar Apna Tikaaya Hoga

Poocha Hoga Jo Kisi Ne Tere Halaat Ka Sabbab
*** Tunay Baaton Main Khoob Uss Se Chupaaya Hoga

muncho · April 5, 2008, 2:46pm

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nice sharing

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · April 5, 2008, 9:36pm

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:-)

being_lonely · April 6, 2008, 2:07am

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Chupaya bhulaya lagaaya mitaya umda kaafi umda :k: thx 4 sharing !

abeeha · April 6, 2008, 8:46am

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thanx all of u i've shared anything here after so long time n i like ur response .

babri · April 6, 2008, 11:15am

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nice one abeeha.

S.786 · April 8, 2008, 12:43pm

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hmmmmmmm
ghazal men ,,us,, par etemaad zabardast.........buhut khooob

_Masoom_Muskaan · April 8, 2008, 12:49pm

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nice:AID:

abeeha · April 8, 2008, 1:22pm

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thank u bht bht MM and s.786:)

Shab-e-Hijar · April 8, 2008, 5:29pm

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very nice :k:

EEMAAN · April 8, 2008, 7:31pm

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Very nice..

Aryaan · April 9, 2008, 2:24am

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Bohat khoon Abeeha...

muddii · April 9, 2008, 5:04am

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Hmmmmm correct me if I am wrong I think it's not Izaat its Mushkil in the first misra?

P.S Nice Choice:)

abeeha · April 9, 2008, 7:22am

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Hmmmmm correct me if I am wrong I think it's not Izaat its Mushkil in the first misra?

well men ne jahan parha tha wahan to yhi likha tha,n i thnk is se is ka poetic effect zada appealing hota hy ,but anyways mushkil b ho to kuch galat nhi.:)