kitna achaa...........

maheen_sajid · June 5, 2003, 10:35am

kitna acha lagta hai
aik narm lehjay ko
dair tak yunhi sunna
usko jazb kerlena
apni har sama’at mein
kitna acha lagta hai
sirf uskay chehray ko
dair tak yunhi takna
usko sabt kerlena
apni har basarat per
kitna achaa lagta hai
aik muskurahat se
chandni ko chun lena
koi khwab bun lena
kitna acha lagta hai
aik aisi hasti ko
jo ke saari dunya se
mukhtalif,anokhi ho
apnay naam karlena
kitna acha lagta hai!

                              by:maheen sajid

Azad · June 5, 2003, 11:27am

Now this is a beauty .. simple and pure

maheen_sajid · June 5, 2003, 11:34am

thanx 4 ur comments.

Azad · June 5, 2003, 11:36am

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*Originally posted by maheen sajid: *
thanx 4 ur comments.
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koi baat nahi kabhi kabhi bholay say ghalti ho hi jati hay

Dilsay · June 6, 2003, 7:06pm

Masha Allah bohat khoob.... chanks for sharing

Philanthrope · June 6, 2003, 7:16pm

wow zabardast maheen… sooo lovely and cute poetry… is that really by you.. I love this one…

:k:

ghazal_kisi_ke · July 9, 2003, 3:55am

very nice:k::k:

Pehalwan · July 9, 2003, 8:06am

buhat khoob:k:
thanks for sharing… (Dilsay)

undefined · July 9, 2003, 11:14am

Buhat alaa Maheen !!

Capricorn · July 9, 2003, 5:18pm

I have always admired your work Maheen. Aap waqaee buhat hee acha likhtee hain…yaqeen na karne kee had tak! Jo khoobsurtee aap ke andar hai woh aapke lafzon ke zariye hum tak puhanch jatee hai. Allah aap ko khushiyan de dher saree :k:

maheen_sajid · July 9, 2003, 6:02pm

thanx alot capricorn

HeArT_HaCKeR · July 9, 2003, 6:16pm

:k: nice …

Maheen2002 · July 10, 2003, 8:46pm

nice…:k:

Khanzada · July 20, 2003, 5:07pm

bohat acha likha hai :k:
yunhi bas likhti rehna
kitna acha lagay ga :~p

Bauhat khoob.

maheen_sajid · July 20, 2003, 5:23pm

thanx again

maheen_sajid · July 20, 2003, 5:24pm

thanx alot

Capricorn · July 21, 2003, 6:53am

Zabardast :k:

cuteepie · July 21, 2003, 10:19am

buhet achay :k:

ASA · July 21, 2003, 1:45pm

very nice… :k:

HeArT_HaCKeR · July 21, 2003, 4:56pm

:k:

keep it up :k: