dhowan bna k hawa main ura dia muj ko
main jal raha tha kisi na bhuja dia muj ko
khara hoon hath main roti k char harf lia
swal ya ha kitaboon na kya dia muj ko
main ak zara bulandi ko chona nikla tha
hawa na tham ka zameen par gira dia muj ko
dhowan bna k hawa main ura dia muj ko
main jal raha tha kisi na bhuja dia muj ko
khara hoon hath main roti k char harf lia
swal ya ha kitaboon na kya dia muj ko
main ak zara bulandi ko chona nikla tha
hawa na tham ka zameen par gira dia muj ko
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ya poem mujy hmara hospital main ae hoa ak patient na sunae ha jo khudkhushi ki koshish ka case main aya tha
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zindagi issi ko kehtey hein....takmeel r u a dr...if yes can u help me?
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ya me a doctor
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Oh, I didn’t know that we have a doctor among us
Lekin yahaN ke mareezoN ko to kuch aur hi dukh la’haq heiN. I hope you will be able to help them :~) Very nice ghazal by the way :k: Please post the complete ghazal if you have. Always a treat to read it full.
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dhowan bna k fiza main ura dia muj ko
main jal raha tha kisi na bhuja dia muj ko
khara hoon aaj bhi roti k char harf lia
swal ya ha kitaboon na kya dia muj ko
safaid sang ki chadar lapait kar mujh par
faseel-e-shahr pe kis nay saja dya muj ko
main ak zara bulandi ko chona nikla tha
hawa na tham ka zameen par gira dia muj ko
beautiful ghazal and Lata ji has sung it beautifully too
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Buhat zabardast a reality
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Umda !
Dr Jee. Aap k mareez ko ek ghazal dedicate kar raha hoon.
phir aaj mujhay tumko bas itna batana hai
hansna hi jeevan hai, hanstay hi jana hai
madhuban ho ya gulshan ho, patjhar ho ya sawan ho
har haal mein insaa'n ka ek phool sa jeevan ho
kaanton mein ulajh kar bhi khushbu hi lutaana hai
hansna hi jeevan hai, hanstay hi jana hai
har pal jo guzar jaey, daaman ko to bhar jaey
ye soch k jee lein to taqdeer badal jaey
is umr ki raahon se khushion ko churaana hai
hansna hi jeevan hai, hanstay hi jana hai
sab dard mita dein hum, har gham ko saza dein hum
kehtay hein jisay jeena, dunya ko sikha dein hum
ye AAJ to apna hai, KAL bhi apnana hai
hansna hi jeevan hai, hanstay hi jana hai
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Thanx Amal, Rarhidali, sad _effect and abala-pa n han ap ki poem no dout bohat achi ha n ho ska to usa ya sunao ge b bt hum n ap sb zindgi ka falsfa bolta han n us na ya falsfa saha ha
any way thanx again to all of u
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KAHEIN MILEY TO USEY YE KEHNA…!
Kahein miley to usey yeh kehna
k faseel-enafrat gira rahi hon
guzrey dinon ko bhula rahi hon
wo apney waadey sey phir gaya hai
mein apney waadey nibha rahi hon
kahein mileyto usey ye kehna
na dil mein koi malal rakhey
hamesha apna khyal rakhey
apney sarey ghum mujhko dey dey
or tamam khushiyan sambhal rakhey
kahein miley to usey ye kehna
mein tanha sawan bitta chuki hon
mein sarey armaan jala chukki hon
jo sholey bharkey thay khwahishon k
wo ansu’on sey apney bujha chuki hon
kahein miley to usey ye kehna
baghair uss k udaas hon mein
badalti rutt ki qyaas hon mein
bujha di apni mohabatton sey
sulagti sadiyoun ki pyaas hon mein
kahein miley to usey ye kehna
k chaak daaman ko si rahi hon
bari mushkil sey gee rahi hon
dia jo nafrat ka zehar usney
smajh k amrat wo pee rahi hon
KAHEIN MILEY TO USSEY YE KEHNA…!!!
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very nice poetry Fiz. thanks for sharing.
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thanx 4 liking it.would like 2 share my own if u wud like 2 ve a look on dat as well?
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MUJHEY TUMSEY MOHABBAT HAI…
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Mujhey tumsey mohabbat hai
sirf tumsey mohabbat hai
tumharey lamss ki khushboo
basey hai chaar soo merey
***tumhari bolti ankhein ***
***kahein atraaf hein merey ***
jin lamhon ko chaha tha
unhi baichain lamhon mein
mujhey tumsey mohabbat hai
sirf tumsey mohabbat hai
kabhi chup caap si baarish mein
kai geeli si yaadon mein
meri tanhai k dairon mein
***kai khamosh ghairon mein ***
sabhi bezaar lamhon mein
mujhey tumsey mohabbat hai
sirf tumsey mohabbat hai
kisi maahroo ki bahon mein
baso jis roz bhi janaan
uss ik gulzaar lamhey mein
badan ki phaili khushboo mein
guzri yaadein bhulaney ko
mujhey dilsey mitaney ko
sirf ikk baar khud sey hi kehna
tumhein mujhsey mohabbat hai
sirf mujhsey mohabbat hai…!!!
nazam by fiz khan**
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khara hoon hath main roti k char harf lia swal ya ha kitaboon na kya dia muj ko
main ak zara bulandi ko chona nikla tha hawa na tham ka zameen par gira dia muj ko
Very nice .............. thanks :)
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Dr Jee. Aap k mareez ko ek ghazal dedicate kar raha hoon.
phir aaj mujhay tumko bas itna batana hai hansna hi jeevan hai, hanstay hi jana hai
madhuban ho ya gulshan ho, patjhar ho ya sawan ho har haal mein insaa'n ka ek phool sa jeevan ho kaanton mein ulajh kar bhi khushbu hi lutaana hai hansna hi jeevan hai, hanstay hi jana hai
har pal jo guzar jaey, daaman ko to bhar jaey ye soch k jee lein to taqdeer badal jaey is umr ki raahon se khushion ko churaana hai hansna hi jeevan hai, hanstay hi jana hai
sab dard mita dein hum, har gham ko saza dein hum kehtay hein jisay jeena, dunya ko sikha dein hum ye AAJ to apna hai, KAL bhi apnana hai hansna hi jeevan hai, hanstay hi jana hai
Very Nice...........)
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Fiz Khan. "KAHIN MILAY TO USAY YE KEHNA". It was awsome.
And ur own poetry isnt bad either. Nice effort. :) I hope u'll keep sharing. :)
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thanx a lot aabla pa:)