kisse hum-safaR banaoun dil k kaarva`n ka..~

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

HeArT_HaCKeR October 25, 2005, 5:04pm 1

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kabhii ishQ haii haQeeQat, kabhii ishQ haii fasana
mere dil kii dharkano`n ko kabhii tum ne aazmana

tere ishQ mien sitam-gaR ye kia aagaya zamana
terii yaad aa aa ker mujhe ker gayii bey-gaana

yehii baat barhte barhte kahiin bann na jaye vehshat
merii justujo tera dil, terii justujo zamana

mere saath chalte chalte bhujhe aasma`n k taaray
nayii roshnii k jugno mere saath tum na aana

kisse hum-safaR banaoun mae dil k kaarva`N ka
na merii haii koii manzil, na mera koii thikana

kabhii Qaafle se mil ker, kabhii Qaafle se bicher ker
mae jal raha hoon lekin ba-andaaz-e-moujzana

tere husn kii ghatayien kahiin aur ja ke barsien
abhii rait haii mera dil isse yun na aazmana

merii aarzoo ko barhne ka koii uzar mil na jaye
mere dil k aainay mien tum na muskurana

yehii soch k chala hai ye ~Aalam~ bhii shehr-e-khoba`n
kabhii raas aa bhii jaye ye andaz-e-aashiQana

terii guftugo mein ~Aalam~ ho kion-ker na ik tarannum
tujhe virsay mien milay hien ye alfaaz shairraana

Golden_Scorpion_1 October 26, 2005, 3:58am 2

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Wah… Its Beautiful… Very Nice… Who is the ALAM… ?? As per his Last Shair.. it seemz to be that.. his Father or Grand father was also Poet

Kesi ho HH Sweety…

Long time No see

nakhan October 26, 2005, 5:01am 3

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Zabardast...

Ranaai_e_Khyal October 26, 2005, 6:40am 4

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Bohat acchi ghazal hay, Shair ka naam kia hay.

Ranaai e khyal.

saroo October 26, 2005, 8:08am 5

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Very very nice.............good rythem of words and thoughts

Maheen2002 October 26, 2005, 6:10pm 6

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beautiful!!!

Koyal October 26, 2005, 8:54pm 7

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nice one heartu :)

HeArT_HaCKeR October 26, 2005, 10:24pm 8

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GS Bhaii: thanks for liking. Aalam is poet na ..lol.. well i dunno if its “takhallus” or real name. towwwwwwwwy!
aur mae yaheen tu hotii hon ap k dil mien

Ranaai e khyal: thankyou. hmm dunno the name of the poet. may be his name is “Aalam”. m not sure.

nakhan, saaro, maheen nd koyal: thankyou!

Golden_Scorpion_1 October 27, 2005, 5:15am 9

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Dil maiN tou Hoti ho Jano.. but… The Problem is.. I dont Have the Eye that can See in my Own Heart

Precious_Khan October 27, 2005, 11:56am 10

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zabardast thanx for sharing dear:)