Delightful puff after a belly brunch.
Crushing packs in an amusing scrunch.
Awe struck watch the macho adds.
FOREST dwellers* carry home wads.
Take you pride in the trick and flick.
Single handed jerk and fancy slick.
Misplaced passion, you kiss the stub.
For mindless arson, you have a club.
Buy fancy tit-bits for the scourge.
A wilting wife needs more rouge.
Lit up fags on the barest hunch.
Care a fig for the angel bunch.
A gift, the little ones, to this world.
How they smile, asleep an curled.
Nascent flowers; don’t hurt no more.
Let the air, they breathe be pure.
Care an shield the expectant ones.
Stop spewing circles an your puns.
Allow your elders fresh air to breathe
Already for air they long and seethe
Off the bus and everyone heaves.
Wish he’s gone an forever leaves.
Scant your regard for their sighs.
Deep down burn their smarting eyes.
Pain and strain your friendly tie.
Till, you from cancer, one day die.
original
(Islamabad)
(May 21, 2009)
*FOREST dwellers
Re: Kiss of Death! … (No tobacco day on 31st May…)
i hope u doin great…
and …hmmmm!..u r the moderator yourself!!!
..my my i have the honor of the moderator talking to me…all by herself…hey thanx…:))
but on aserious note…if it bugging you guys dat much…i can wind up shop from here…guess…not the place for serious poetry… English i mean…
oh but yes…i noticed u say…its gup shup…
let me know…pl..:/…u can do it in urdu if u like…but not roman urdu pl…
Re: Kiss of Death! … (No tobacco day on 31st May…)
dont worrie man i realy like your contribution..wo to bas mujhe english litrature mein itna intrest nahi hai i like a lil bit urdu poetry :) you can share your work and stay here with us ok
Re: Kiss of Death! … (No tobacco day on 31st May…)
dont worrie man i realy like your contribution..wo to bas mujhe english litrature mein itna intrest nahi hai i like a lil bit urdu poetry :) you can share your work and stay here with us ok
OH!
i am honored to be allowed to continue to post....you are but generous lady...!!!
what would i do with out such godly generosity.....
achi hi hogi 
its not only mine , apka mera ham sab ka Forum hai 