Kisi ki Yaad

moonmine · February 23, 2008, 5:21pm

Kisi ki yaad dil main hai, koi ehsaas baqi hai…
**Badalte mosmon k darmian Ek raaz baqi hai… **

Abhi to main safar may hon, milengi manzilain mujh ko..
Magar in raston k darmian Ek saath baqi hai..

Kahin per sham dhalti hai, kahin raat hoti hai…
Abhi to chandni hai, Chand ki raat baqi hai…

Chaley aao kisi din tum hamara haal bhi dekho…
**Hamara jism murda hai, magar Ek saans baqi hai… **

Umeed hai phir bhi milega wo hamay aik din…
Khuda per hai bharosa..
**Abhi Khuda ki zaat baqi hai… **

bheegiyaad · February 23, 2008, 5:50pm

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very nice :k:

K337 · February 23, 2008, 7:00pm

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aww :@:

Hard2Understand · February 24, 2008, 8:35pm

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awww,, how sweeet...

**

whoa!!

Shab-e-Hijar · February 24, 2008, 10:11pm

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bohat khoob :k:

hiba_no.1 · February 25, 2008, 4:28pm

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wow!!!Excellent :k:

well done,u r a talented girl

waiting for next one

babar444 · February 25, 2008, 6:13pm

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beautiful piece of work ,keep it up

zero_zero_seven · February 25, 2008, 8:43pm

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Lajawab

zabardast

fizatiq · February 25, 2008, 8:53pm

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beautiful

moonmine · February 26, 2008, 9:05pm

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thx** by**

thx 4 liking

moonmine · February 26, 2008, 9:07pm

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bohat shukriya…

thx 4 appreciation

i know.. thx

moonmine · February 26, 2008, 9:12pm

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thank u sooooo much

sooo sweet

thx a lot!

thx 4 appreciation

hmmmm…

moonmine · February 26, 2008, 9:18pm

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wo to main hoon

any comment???

thx janab!

goodBabu · February 26, 2008, 10:57pm

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Ap kii apnii hey?

Bohat acha Takheyal hey Ap ka
wazan bhee hey, aur rawanii bhee

Ahsas bhee hey, aur ummed bhee
Teen cheezain aik acha shae'r banatee hain

takhey'ul
Ahsas
Umeed...
Mughey is men tenoo nazar aien...

good, very nice..keep it up

Whatever · February 26, 2008, 11:23pm

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Awwwwwwwww....datz nycc!

moonmine · February 28, 2008, 9:50pm

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^ thx 4 appreciation :)

Asma_Farhan · February 29, 2008, 10:17am

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Very nice especially the optimistic approach towards the end! I like such pieces that end with something positive.
Its beautiful

fairyno1 · March 2, 2008, 12:59pm

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amazing moonmine!:)