Kisi ka dard hoo

cutenice62 · June 18, 2013, 10:34am

kisi ka dard ho, dil bay qaraar apna hai
hawa kahein ki ho, seena figar apna hai

ho koi fasal magar zakham khil he jatay hain
sadaa bahar, dil-e-daagh daar apna hai

Jo shaad phirtay thay kal, aaj cho’up k rotay hain
hazar shukar, ghum paidaar apna hai

isi liyay yahan kuch loag hum say jaltay hain
k ji jalanay may kion ikhtiyaar apna hai

na tang kar dil-e-mehzoon ko aye ghum-e-dunia
khudai bhar may, yehi ghum gusaar apna hai

kahien mila tu kisi din maana he lain gay usay
woo zood ranj sahee, phir bhi yaar apna hai

Woo koi apnay siwaa hoo tu us ka shikwa karoon
Judai apni hai, or intazaar apna hai

(Nasir Kazmi)

LP · June 18, 2013, 10:36am

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Poem ko apne words mai summarize karain plz

Nain · June 18, 2013, 10:38am

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isi liyay yahan kuch loag hum say jaltay hain

cutenice62 · June 18, 2013, 10:40am

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shair ka dukh zaati hai lakin us ka bayaan afaaqi hai…alfaz us k hain, mahsoosat hamaray hain…halaat us k hain, mukhatib hamari zaat hai…

LP · June 18, 2013, 10:45am

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aur zara detail mai plzz…shaeri de zyadah ye post parh k maza aa gaya

cutenice62 · June 18, 2013, 10:47am

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may samjhaoon bhi :(…any body else can do this :)?

Nain · June 18, 2013, 10:56am

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main kerti hun

**Hawala-e-nazam
**
NAzir kazmi

**Tashrih
**
shair kehta hai ke

LP · June 18, 2013, 10:57am

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Do it plz

cutenice62 · June 18, 2013, 12:59pm

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may Pakistani hoon…itni mehnat kaisay karoon :'(?

muqawwee123 · June 18, 2013, 7:14pm

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Muhabbat ek hi waqt main khush guman aur bad-guman kaise hoti hai… Jisse chaha jae usko 100 khoon bhi maaf hote hain aur uski koi ghalati nazar hi nahin aati… phir wo waqt bhi aata hai, jab choti choti baten bhi na-qabil e bardasht lagne lagti hai…

Kia muhabbat ke darya aakhirkar utar hi jate hain?

cutenice62 · June 19, 2013, 7:10am

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nahi jb mohabat pay expectations ghalib aa jati hain tu aisa tu hota hai na…insan ki jibilat may hai yeh sab…Jin may perfection hoti hai woo ishq-e-majazi say ishq-e-haqiqi tak ka safar taay kar leta hai…or us safar ki mushkillaat yeh expectations he hoti hain…

LP · June 19, 2013, 7:13am

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Is it possible not to expect from the ones you love ?

cutenice62 · June 19, 2013, 7:15am

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Madam, yes, Einstein kehta hai

may khush rehta hoon…kion k may kisi say kuch nahi mangta, kuch nahi chahta…

muqawwee123 · June 19, 2013, 8:44am

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ye to Waliyon wali siffat hai… her aam ke bus main aisa karna possible nahin

cutenice62 · June 19, 2013, 9:07am

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this was what i said.

LP · June 19, 2013, 9:56am

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Expectation isn’t a standalone entity.What about the stuff attached to it ? What will happen to them ?

cutenice62 · June 19, 2013, 10:01am

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:k:

now answer this

LP · June 19, 2013, 10:11am

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agar khud he ans krna hota tou poochti kyon ?

cutenice62 · June 19, 2013, 10:18am

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is liyay k tajasus insan ki fitrat hai…

Microbian · June 19, 2013, 10:19am

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