Kisi k gham main...

ASA · September 21, 2007, 9:43am

kisi k gham maiN waqar khona,
koi sunega tu kya kahega
ye ratoN ko uth k tera rona koi,
sunega tu kya kahega
zamana tu chaRhte shabab ka hai pujari,
ye din kosona ye shab ko jagna
koi sunega tu kya kahega.
bhanwar maiN mujh ko jo choR daite
tu baat tum pay kabhi na aati
ye mujh ko sahil pay laa dabona,
koi sunega tu kya kahega
jo jee main aaya to khoob khaila,
jub jee se utra tu tooR dala,
mera dil bhe hai ik khilona,
koi sunega tu kya kya kahega

Dushwari · September 21, 2007, 10:21am

Re: Kisi k gham main...

Asweetas,
mukarer. thank for sharing this poem.
Dushwari

bheegiyaad · September 21, 2007, 10:26am

Re: Kisi k gham main...

nice:)

sunny_nicky · September 21, 2007, 11:31am

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niceeeeee

Shab-e-Hijar · September 21, 2007, 12:59pm

Re: Kisi k gham main…

bhanwar maiN mujh ko jo choR daite
tu baat tum pay kabhi na aati
ye mujh ko sahil pay laa dabona,
koi sunega tu kya kahega

this part of poem is very nice :k:

tum_bin_1 · September 21, 2007, 2:18pm

Re: Kisi k gham main…

Bohat Khoob :k:

SJ · September 21, 2007, 2:39pm

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wel bohat umdaa nazam...........
bohat touchy thee...........

ASA · September 22, 2007, 8:39pm

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*Shukria... *