Kisi din...!!!

Its my first contributions at GS!!! Hope none would laugh at my poem!!!

Uullhji hui yaadon ko
Suljhane chale aao kisi din
Khawabon se nikal kar
Haqeeqat ban jao kisi din
Tum se wabasta hain
Kuch baatain, kuch yaadain apni
Dar hai k meri zee’st ka ye rakht-e-safar
Tum cheen na lay jao kisi din
Tumhare laa’ot aanay ka ik imkaan
Rehta hai mere din mai deep ki surat
Gar na aana chaho
Tu ye deep bujha jao kisi din

~~ Inno ~~

Re: Kisi din…!!!

achi koshish hai… keep it up :k:

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nice:D

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^
Iss main daant nikalne ki kia baat thi :smilestar:

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:vivo: ek to poem parhi uper say maara

Re: Kisi din…!!!

Bohat achi koshish hai Innocent Attitude..:k:

Re: Kisi din...!!!

nice effort
keep it up

Re: Kisi din…!!!

Thank you all :slight_smile:

K337:
Mara thori hi hai wo tu bas waise hi… :smooth: Accha ab nahi!!! :hugz:

Re: Kisi din...!!!

v nice sahring Inoo ap ko dekh k KISI ki yaad a jati keep it up :)

Re: Kisi din…!!!

awwwwww thank you :bb:


BTW kis ki yaad aa jati hai? Innocent_Smile ki???!!! If yes, my plaesure:blush:** Waise ap muhje daikhti kasie ho???** :stuck_out_tongue: :rotfl: