khud apne liye beth keh sochein ghay kishi din
yuu.N hai ke tujhe bhuul keh dekhe.nge kishi din
bhaTake hue phirtein hai.n kahi lafz jo dil main
dunhiyaa neh diya waqt to likhein ghay kishi din
apas kii kishi ki baat ka miltaa nahin hai waqt
har baat yeh kehtein hai keh bethein ghay kishi din
jahtii hai kishi jhil ki gehrahee kaha tak
aankhoN main teri duub keh dekhein ghay kishi din…
wah ji wah:k:
oh thanks jee…humhein to lagha keh kishi ko samajh hi nahin ahee…
Baut khoob...!
nice!
thanx for sharin!
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*Originally posted by Nayab: *
oh thanks jee...humhein to lagha keh kishi ko samajh hi nahin ahee...:(
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q nahi smajh ahee itni achi tou poetry hai
thanks jee …
Arif jee Thanks…
Hum hai jee thanks …wese kiya baat hai aj kal to aap hum seh baat hi nahin kartein …kion…kohi naraazgee??
Bohat khoob:k:
Re: kishi din .....
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*Originally posted by Nayab: *
jahtii hai kishi jhil ki gehrahee kaha tak
aankhoN main teri duub keh dekhein ghay kishi din.........
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ziyada naheen doobna nayab nahen to dhoonditee rah jaeinge log ushee din;)
niceeee :k:
zabardast:k:
kishii din nhi:smack: kissi din shair bhi koi budhoo tha
zaberdast :k:
Thanks Amal jee:blush:
Thanks Nikii ,Chando and Sharara:)
Capricorn jee fikhar nahin karhein esha kuch nahin hone walha…
Re: kishi din .....
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*Originally posted by Nayab: *
khud apne liye beth keh sochein ghay kishi din
yuu.N hai ke tujhe bhuul keh dekhe.nge kishi din
bhaTake hue phirtein hai.n kahi lafz jo dil main
dunhiyaa neh diya waqt to likhein ghay kishi din
apas kii kishi ki baat ka miltaa nahin hai waqt
har baat yeh kehtein hai keh bethein ghay kishi din
jahtii hai kishi jhil ki gehrahee kaha tak
aankhoN main teri duub keh dekhein ghay kishi din.........
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bahut khoob nice one :)
boht achei nayaboooo:)
Thanks Lamhay jee and Masoom Muskan jee...
Masoom kaha hoti hai aap ? aj kal to aap seh baat hi nahi ho pah rehi :(
Very Nice Nayab sis, Thanks for sharing 
Buhat khoob Nayab :k:
Nice one nayab :k:
Buhat KHooooooob :k: