kis ne kaha usko ghazal maiN saja k la

[Koyal]

*

funkar hai to hath pe suraj saja k la
bujhta howa diya na muqabil hawa k la

darya ka intaqam dabo na de ghar taira
sahil se rouz rouz na kankar utha ke la

samaan wafa k bandh magar soch soch kar
is ibtada main yuuN na sakht intaha k la

thori si aur mouj maiN aa aa’ey hawa-e-gul
thori si us k jism ki khoushbu chura k la

mohsin ab uska naam hai sab ki zubaN par
kis ne kaha usko ghazal maiN saja k la *

[WiseGuy]

:k:
Bohat khoob… Bohat achi hai Koyal

[Koyal]

*Originally posted by WiseGuy: *
:k:
Bohat achi hai Koyal

koi shaak hia kia abhi

[Daagh]

Re: kis ne kaha usko ghazal maiN saja k la

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Koyal: *

funkar hai to hath pe suraj saja k la
bujhta howa diya na muqabil hawa k la

darya ka intaqam dabo na de ghar taira
sahil se rouz rouz na kankar utha ke la

samaan wafa k bandh magar soch soch kar
is ibtada main yuuN na sakht intaha k la

thori si aur mouj maiN aa aa'ey hawa-e-gul
thori si us k jism ki khoushbu chura k la

mohsin ab uska naam hai sab ki zubaN par
kis ne kaha usko ghazal maiN saja k la *
[/QUOTE]

bahot khoob koyal jee :)

thanks :D

[WiseGuy]

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Koyal: *

koi shaak hia kia abhi ;)
[/QUOTE]

no nahee hai shak bilkul bhi.

[chand_chehra]

Re: kis ne kaha usko ghazal maiN saja k la

*Originally posted by Koyal: *

*

funkar hai to hath pe suraj saja k la
bujhta howa diya na muqabil hawa k la

darya ka intaqam dabo na de ghar taira
sahil se rouz rouz na kankar utha ke la

samaan wafa k bandh magar soch soch kar
is ibtada main yuuN na sakht intaha k la

thori si aur mouj maiN aa aa’ey hawa-e-gul
thori si us k jism ki khoushbu chura k la

mohsin ab uska naam hai sab ki zubaN par
kis ne kaha usko ghazal maiN saja k la *

bohat khoob :k:

[system]

*mohsin ab uska naam hai sab ki zubaN par
kis ne kaha usko ghazal maiN saja k la *

very nice :k:

[Amal]

Re: kis ne kaha usko ghazal maiN saja k la

*Originally posted by Koyal: *

*

funkar hai to hath pe suraj saja k la
bujhta howa diya na muqabil hawa k la

darya ka intaqam dabo na de ghar taira
sahil se rouz rouz na kankar utha ke la

thori si aur mouj maiN aa aa’ey hawa-e-gul
thori si us k jism ki khoushbu chura k la

Bohat khoobsoorat ghazal hey Koyal:k:…thanx for sharing with us:)

[ullujii]

*Originally posted by Koyal: *

*

funkar hai to hath pe suraj saja k la
bujhta howa diya na muqabil hawa k la

darya ka intaqam dabo na de ghar taira
sahil se rouz rouz na kankar utha ke la

samaan wafa k bandh magar soch soch kar
is ibtada main yuuN na sakht intaha k la

thori si aur mouj maiN aa aa’ey hawa-e-gul
thori si us k jism ki khoushbu chura k la

mohsin ab uska naam hai sab ki zubaN par
kis ne kaha usko ghazal maiN saja k la *

:love:

[system]

:k:

[SuraJ]

thori si aur mouj maiN aa aa’ey hawa-e-gul
thori si us k jism ki khoushbu chura k la

Touching…

mohsin ab uska naam hai sab ki zubaN par
kis ne kaha usko ghazal maiN saja k la

.
Bahut Umda

[Capricorn]

Buhat khoob nikii :k:

[cuteepie]

:k:

[MANAN]

:french:

[Koyal]

thanks WG...VV...cutee...suraj...khamoshnigahiN...& capri..:)

[Koyal]

*Originally posted by ullujii: *

:love:

adamkhor ULU kis ko dekh k ankhon main khooN…wesay aj kal ankhon ki infection achi nahi dawa daliey ankhoN maiN

[Koyal]

Re: Re: kis ne kaha usko ghazal maiN saja k la

*Originally posted by Amal: *

Bohat khoobsoorat ghazal hey Koyal:k:…thanx for sharing with us:)

thanks for reading.

[Koyal]

Re: Re: kis ne kaha usko ghazal maiN saja k la

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Daagh: *

bahot khoob koyal jee :)

thanks :D
[/QUOTE]

shukria sallu g..:)

[Koyal]

Re: Re: kis ne kaha usko ghazal maiN saja k la

*Originally posted by chand_chehra: *

bohat khoob :k:

thanks chand g ..

[Koyal]

*Originally posted by MANAN: *
:french:

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