Kis nay kaha tha tum say mohabat kee baat kar

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Kis nay kaha tha tum say mohabat kee baat kar
Aab khud he sooch kar koyee rah ikhtayar kar

Dil ke tarap jeenay tu na day gee magar
Ya such hai aab yoon he basar yaar kar

Tari qasam thee ka chahoo gay umer bahar
Tum nay kaha tha mujah say mara itbar kar

Dua nahi dayta tu koyee bad dua he day
Itna karam tu aab maray yaar kar

Koyee umeed koyee rishta nahi raha
Kiss aaS par Dilsay kahoon intazar kar

by Dilsay

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Re: Kis nay kaha tha tum say mohabat kee baat kar

:k:
but is ** aasa **
ki samj nahi aiey…

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Re: Re: Kis nay kaha tha tum say mohabat kee baat kar

thanks

seems did not type properly aas mean umeed… can you tell me how to speel properly

thanks

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*Originally posted by Dilsay: *

thanks

seems did not type properly aas mean umeed... can you tell me how to speel properly

thanks
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assra hai other word but i guess asra theek bethay gha nahi ap agar umeed he use kar lo tu i guess..agay ap khud shaier ho hamin tu pata nahi jus notice k sari gazal partey partey aik dum se break..u know wot i mean..:)

PS: but dun think me tanqeed akr rehi ..:)

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*Originally posted by Koyal: *

assra hai other word but i guess asra theek bethay gha nahi ap agar umeed he use kar lo tu i guess..agay ap khud shaier ho hamin tu pata nahi jus notice k sari gazal partey partey aik dum se break..u know wot i mean..:)

PS: but dun think me tanqeed akr rehi ..:)
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no it is ok and thanks for your comments......

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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Kis nay kaha tha tum say mohabat kee baat kar

:k:

i meant aa’ss he tha me ne galat likha ..:slight_smile:

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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Kis nay kaha tha tum say mohabat kee baat kar

Thanks alot

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Nice1 :k:
keep it up

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Re: Kis nay kaha tha tum say mohabat kee baat kar

very nice dilsey :)

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Dilsay its really nice aap ki shairee main din ba din nikhaar aa reha hai keep it up :k:

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Thanks alot

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thanks for your appriciation…

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lovely …keep it up :k:

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real nice one :k:

thanks for sharing

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Thanks alot… for your comments

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Bohat shukriya chalain aap ko behi kuch pasand aya…

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Khoob lika dilsay:)

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*Originally posted by Dilsay: *

Bohat shukriya chalain aap ko behi kuch pasand aya....
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dug dugi ka jana humain humysha pasand aya hay :D

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Re: Re: Kis nay kaha tha tum say mohabat kee baat kar

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*Originally posted by nikii: *
very nice dilsey :)
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Thanks alot

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Buhat Khoob:k:…