kinara

nakhuda hota ager main jo kinare hota
besahara na bhatakta jo sahara hota

apni barbaadi ka main khud hi zimedaar nahi
kuch to ban jata ager saatha tumhara hota

waqat ke saath badal jaoge socha na kabi
jaan jata to na main dard ka mara hota

khudse bas aaik gila hai jo pashemaan hoon main
sochta hoon na kabhi tum ko pukara hota

tum na samjhoge mere dard ki gehrayoun ko
kaash tumne bhi mera waqat guzara hota

tum na samjhoge mere dard ki gehrayoun ko
kaash tumne bhi mera waqat guzara hota

Wah… Mashallah… Daddu Gi… Dont U want to Have a Book of Ur Poetry? Or U have one already?

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BOHAT KHOOB
DADDU
Ghuroob hotay howay aaftab ki manind
Bichahr kay us nay tabyat udaas kardi hai

Dost main ne books to kaafi likhi hain mager kisi ko bhi shaaiya nahi kia Shaairi main shoq main karta hoon aur wesey bhi doosroon ki zindagi ke baarey main likh kar main koi naam kamana nahi chahta.

haan ager tum ye koi bhi chahey to apne naam se meri ghazaloon ki kitaab shaaya kar le mujhey koi aaiteraaz nahi hoga balke faqar hoga ke koi mere hunar ko itna azeem samajhta hai ke usne apne aap he usey parwaan charha dia.

mujhko shohrat ki zarorat nahi jeene ke liye :dost tum jesey he kaafi hain mujhey jeene ko.

and Speedup42001 thank you.

Gila main kesey karon tumse bewafaai ka
meri he bhool thi jo tumse piyaar kar betha.

Daddu Gi…

Got it wat U mean… :slight_smile:

I was Just curious, If I was poet like U .. I would have my Book :smiley:

Good Luck :k:

:flower2:

Daddu… aap bahut acha likhtey hain… book kyun nahin publish kartey? :halo:

Re: kinara

main haqeeqat ko chupata hoon ke majboor hoon main
naam daddu jo batata hoon ke mashoor hoon main
mujhse poocho na ke main koun hoon kia karta hoon
bas samajh lo ke bauhat paa hoon per door hoon main

Re: kinara

Daddu Gi.. 2 Ashaar for you :)

Itna paas hokay bhi tum door, Magar kiuaN?
KauN ho tum Jaan, Na PoochooN maiN, Magar kiuN?

Chup naheeN sakti Haqeeqat, Laakh majboori sahi
ShuhratooN ki bijliaaN bhi istarha bujhti naheeN

Re: kinara

Acha jawaab likha hai GS.

dost main nahi jaanta kitne loog yahaan kis kis naam se aatey hain jis tarha main Daddu hoon koi jo mujhey jaanta hai pata nahi kis naam se hoga ager main ne apna naam aur apni haqeeqat bata di to jitne loog mujhey jaante hain mere peechey pardh jaayenge. mujhye takreeban hazaar se ziada loog jaante hain main sirf apno ki baat he kar raha hoon koi mashoor actor nahi hoon bas aik jana pehchana insaan hoon jo shaairi ke alawa kisi aur tarha se mashoor hoon.

main wo shaair hoon jo har roop ki likhta hoon ghazal
khaar ko bhi kaai lafaaz main kehta hoon kanwal
mujhko jo jaante hain wo mujhey shaair se nahi
main wo kaatib hoon jo har roop ko deta hai badal

dar haqeeqat to main likhta hoon ghazal gham ke magar
meri duniya se nahi gham ka hua koi guzar

mujhko jaano gaye to tum ye nahi keh paao gaye
main ne kata hai zamane main kabi gham ka safar

Re: kinara

dar haqeeqat to main likhta hoon ghazal gham ke magar
meri duniya se nahi gham ka hua koi guzar
mujhko jaano gaye to tum ye nahi keh paao gaye
main ne kata hai zamane main kabi gham ka safar

WOW .. simply Amazing… Really Loved it… :flower2:

And.. ALso…

main wo kaatib hoon jo har roop ko deta hai badal

Zabardast…

Apnay Fan Club maiN Aik Vacancy Khali RakhaiN Daddu Gi… Mujhay Lagta hay ke BUhut Jald I will need That vacancy :slight_smile:

Re: kinara

tumhari dosti kaafi hai fan banane ka koi shooq nahi mujhey bas tum mere dost raho aur mujhey apni sula do main bhi tumhare fun ka mureed hoon. jo kehte ho jesey kehte ho uska aik alag he andaaz hai ...

har aik shakhs jo tareef meri karta hai
mere liye wo koi rehguzar nikale ga
mujhey to shoqh nahi shohrate jahaa ki mager
mere kalaam se wo naam khud kamale ga

Re: kinara

har aik shakhs jo tareef meri karta hai
mere liye wo koi rehguzar nikale ga
mujhey to shoqh nahi shohrate jahaa ki mager
mere kalaam se wo naam khud kamale ga

Wah… Once again :k: :slight_smile: