Asalam U Alaikum ! how are you all hope fine shine here is sumthin i like madly hope u all like it too !
Umar rafta zara dheere ghuzar
abhi waqt hai kuch lamhe churane hai mujhe
abhi to unka deedar bhi ata nahi hoa
chup chup ke dekhta hon bahane se ise
kuch kaliyaa iske baalo mien pironi hai mujhe
kuch phool iski raaho mien bichane hai
de muhalat itni ke isse nayaab kardoo
chand taarey iske daaman mien sajane hai mujhe
BeIng lOnely !!! sId !!!
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its really nice
shuker hai app aj udass nahi hain
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aksar hotay hain par aaj nahi 
hathi k daant dikhanay k aur khaanay k aur 
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ok tu ajj aisa kai ahua jo app itne khush hain
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aap ne reply kia hai 
kia yeh kam khushi ki baat hai
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kyun app kya mere intezaar main bethe the
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aray mein samjha aap mere intazar mein thi :(
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haan haan mujey aur koi kaam jo nahi hai
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aaisa he lag raha jo floddin here in poetry forum 
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Asalam U Alaikum ! how are you all hope fine shine here is sumthin i like madly hope u all like it too !
Umar rafta zara dheere ghuzar abhi waqt hai kuch lamhe churane hai mujhe
abhi to unka deedar bhi ata nahi hoa chup chup ke dekhta hon bahane se ise
kuch kaliyaa iske baalo mien pironi hai mujhe kuch phool iski raaho mien bichane hai
de muhalat itni ke isse nayaab kardoo chand taarey iske daaman mien sajane hai mujhe
BeIng lOnely !!! sId !!!
walikum salam im fine and hope that all members too.Sid best like always aap k her thread acha hota hai keep it up
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[quote="being_lonely"]
Asalam U Alaikum ! how are you all hope fine shine here is sumthin i like madly hope u all like it too !
Umar rafta zara dheere ghuzar
abhi waqt hai kuch lamhe churane hai mujhe
abhi to unka deedar bhi ata nahi hoa
chup chup ke dekhta hon bahane se ise
kuch kaliyaa iske baalo mien pironi hai mujhe
kuch phool iski raaho mien bichane hai
de muhalat itni ke isse nayaab kardoo
chand taarey iske daaman mien sajane hai mujhe
Waaqt baay waaqt taree yaad satanaay aay
Lout kaay phir saay judaai kay zaamaany aay
Hai wohh baa-zid tua yeh marzi hai uski yaaro
Mein nay kab chaha k wo mujh ko mananay aay
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Thanks everyone jo achi ghazal hoti hai us pe rep he kam aatay hain ulta he hisaab hai
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her kisis ki apni apni apni choice hoti hai, ab jisse jo pasand ayegi ussi pe he rep kare ga na
Bari baat hai aaj aap bhi smile ker rahe hain
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her kisis ki apni apni apni choice hoti hai, ab jisse jo pasand ayegi ussi pe he rep kare ga na Bari baat hai aaj aap bhi smile ker rahe hain
apki choice to yehi hai na ;)
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buhut khub :k:
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siiiiiiiiiiidd its maziingg!!..
good wrkkk
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buhut khoob :)
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very nice.:)
