Khwaab

Mai Khwaab ban kar usko Neend mai dikhai dun,Wo mera Karb jo chahe to mai usse Juddai dun,

Is tarah chahe mujhe ke har gharri usko,
Mai Dharkanoon ki tarah Qalb mai sunnai dun,

Tadap Tadap ke Maangta rahe mujhko lekin,
Siwaee apne mai usko sarri Khuddai dun

ab ap sab phir kahenge ke aise hota nahi hai…
magar baat ye hai mai samjahti hun ke jab insaan kissi se itna Hurt hota hai to aise Feelings bhi hoti hain
chahe hum aisa na bhi karen real mai magar feelings to a sakti hain …
or not???but itne mazbut log bhi hote hi honge warna is kisam ki poetry bhi na hoti

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Originally posted by masoom si:
**Mai Khwaab ban kar usko Neend mai dikhai dun,Wo mera Karb jo chahe to mai usse Juddai dun,

Is tarah chahe mujhe ke har gharri usko,
Mai Dharkanoon ki tarah Qalb mai sunnai dun,

Tadap Tadap ke Maangta rahe mujhko lekin,
Siwaee apne mai usko sarri Khuddai dun

ab ap sab phir kahenge ke aise hota nahi hai....
magar baat ye hai mai samjahti hun ke jab insaan kissi se itna Hurt hota hai to aise Feelings bhi hoti hain
chahe hum aisa na bhi karen real mai magar feelings to a sakti hain .....
or not????but itne mazbut log bhi hote hi honge warna is kisam ki poetry bhi na hoti

**
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bahot achha hai, masoom si jee.....
waise main aapke baat se bhi sahmat hoon.
Thanx for sharing...


Baza ye zabt-e-gham phir bhi,mohabbat meiN kabhi ro ley
Dabaane ke liye har dard, ye naadaN nahiN hota.

Beautiful expression

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masoom ji

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MeiN pal do pal ka shaaer hooN…

bohat khoob masoom see..

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achi hai ..


mairay dill mairay mussafir

bouhat khoob

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waah masoom kya khoob kaha hai
very nice

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wafa bhi jhooM uthay yo wafa karay koi
nimaaZ 14 sadi se hai muntaziR logo|
HussaiN ke tarha aye ada karay koi
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~~Experience is the worst teacher; it gives the test before presenting the lesson.~~*

thanks to u all
Pasand karne ka

very hifi selection

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massooM si itna ghussa kyon hay app mae

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AissooN ko sann-Dil kehatay haiaN shaiD

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  • When a blind man carries a lame man,
    both go forward*

[This message has been edited by juMurA (edited January 31, 2002).]

Shahid nahi yakeenan…
but Ye Mardoon ka Maashra waqaee sangdil bana ke rakh deta hai!!!
and I hate Mard…sorry to all jinko mai janti bhi nahi but its genarelly

Ik Darya ki Khatir aaj ek Sehra ne KhudKushi kar li