Khvaab-baseraa

Dushwari · January 24, 2008, 2:49am

is vaqet to yuun lagataa hai ab kuchh bhi nahi hai
mehataab na suuraaj na endheraa na saveraa
aankhon ke dariche’ mein kisi husn kii jhalakan
aur dil ki panaahon mein kisi dard kaa deiraa
mumkin hai koe vahem ho mumkin hai sunaa ho
galiyoon mein kisi chaap kaa ek aakhiri pheraa
shaakhoon mein kheyaaloon ke ghane peir ki shaayad
ab aake karegaa na koi khvaab baseraa
ik bair na ik mahar na ik rabt na rishtaa
teiraa koi apanaa na paraayaa koi meraa
maanaa ki ye sunsaan gharee sakht bharee hai
lekin mereye dil, ye to faqat ek gharee hai
himet karo jine’ ko abhi umr paree hai

-Faiz

muddii · January 24, 2008, 4:20am

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Zabardast Choice:bb:

Dushwari · January 24, 2008, 5:12am

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thanks, muddi.
makes sense, these lines.
so i shared.

best,

Dushwari

redidentity · January 24, 2008, 5:29am

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beautiful :k:

bheegiyaad · January 24, 2008, 9:14am

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very nice:k:

sunny_nicky · January 26, 2008, 2:21pm

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teiraa koi apanaa na paraayaa koi meraa
maanaa ki ye sunsaan gharee sakht bharee hai
..

nice dushwari g :)

NikamiJano · January 26, 2008, 3:53pm

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Beautiful Dushi :)

Dushwari · January 27, 2008, 4:48am

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thanks, eveyone. :>
best,

Dushwari

Jhanjharewali · January 27, 2008, 6:25am

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Beautiful. and touching in a profoundly sad way. like a haunting melody...ufff :(

Dushwari · January 27, 2008, 8:52pm

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dear jhanjherwali,
cheer up :)
life is all good.
bad comes and the bad gets bad.
good souls endure and continue being good. :)
Faiz is very profound in his poems.
i really like the wording of the poem.
thanks,
Dushwari