khuwabon, mohabat, afsana

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Boht sajaye they aankho’n mein khuwab meine bhi
Sahay hain us k liye ye azab meine bhi. .

Judai’on ki khalish us ne bhi zahir na ki
Chupaye apny ghum-o-iztaraab meine bhi. .

Diye bujhaye k sar-e-shaam so gaya tha wo
Bitai so k shab-e-mahtaab meine bhi. .

Yehi nahi k mujhy us ne dard-e-hijr diya
Judai’on ka diya hai jawab meine bhi. .

Kisi ne khoon mein tar choori’an jo bheji hain
Likhi hai khoon-e-jigar se kitaab meine bhi. .

Khiza’n ka waar bhi kaar’gar tha dil per magar
Boht bacha kar rakha ye gulab meine bhi. . !

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Re: khuwabon, mohabat, afsana

mohobbatain jab shumaar karna to saazishain bhi shumaar karna
jo meray hissay main aayee hain wo azyatain bhi shumaar karna
jo harf loh e wafa pe likhay huay hain unko bhi daikh lena
jo raayegaan hogai hain wo ibaaratain bhi shumaar karna
tum apni mujbooriyon kay qissay zaroor likhna wazahaton say
jo meri aankhon main jal bujhi hain wo khwahishain bhi shumaar karna

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Re: khuwabon, mohabat, afsana

Zindagi khawab-e-pareshaan se zeyada to nahin,
Is main tabeer bhi mil jaye yeh waada to nahin,

Bewafa hum hi sahi, khud pe bhi kuch ghaur karo,
Be’rukhi tumhari bhi hadh se zeyadaa to nahin..

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Re: khuwabon, mohabat, afsana

Doesn't match as a reply to the lines I posted.or does it ?

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Re: khuwabon, mohabat, afsana

nope they dont.

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Re: khuwabon, mohabat, afsana

Phir ?:konfused:

I posted a reply to tht sher to posted.

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Re: khuwabon, mohabat, afsana

ok let me change it …

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Re: khuwabon, mohabat, afsana

Post a sher which replies to my posted sher :D

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Re: khuwabon, mohabat, afsana

its ok now i think :)

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Re: khuwabon, mohabat, afsana

hisaab baraber hu gaya :hehe:

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:k:

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Re: khuwabon, mohabat, afsana

Meri berukhi ka sabab hai kya mery rukh pe kyon ye jalal hai
Main karongi teri shikayatein kahan mujh me itni majaal hai

Thori se editing ke hai :sid:

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Re: khuwabon, mohabat, afsana

Nice.

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Re: khuwabon, mohabat, afsana

Asar dil per karay shikwa,
shikayat ho to aisi ho.!

Galay lag kar koi roye,
Nadamat ho to aisi ho.!
…
yehi mehsus ho jaisay
kai sadiyan guzari hain

faqat ek pal ki furqat mein,
Aziat ho to aisi ho..!!

mujhe kanta chubhay aur
us ki ankhon se lahu tapke,
talluq ho to aisa ho,
MUHABAT ho to aisi ho.

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Re: khuwabon, mohabat, afsana

Naraz Nahi Hain Hum Janaa,

Bas Thori Si Shikayat Hai,

Yeh Bhi es Liye Hai Ke,

Humko Baypanah Muhabbat Hai,

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Re: khuwabon, mohabat, afsana

That’s all I could come up with :bummer:

I wish lily participated too…she is good at replying with sher..

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Re: khuwabon, mohabat, afsana

lily?

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Re: khuwabon, mohabat, afsana

A guppan...my friend...at times we used to reply with shers on fb.It used to b fun.

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Re: khuwabon, mohabat, afsana

:nook:

maza nahi aya

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Re: khuwabon, mohabat, afsana

ahbaaab nahi tu kiya howa aghyaar say madad lay looo