Khuwab kay azzab

                         Mer janay waloon per 

bohat say ansoo baha ker

sabber to aa hee jata hay
dil akhir ther hee jata hay !

zkhaum ger koi lag jaye
dawa yahan kam aajayee
merhum kissi kay rakhnay say
zakhum bher to jata hay !

kery koi bay wafayee
ho muhabbat ki ruswayee
kissi ki wafa say phir
yaqeen aa to jata hay !

sookhay hoyee paair per
bahaar kay aa janya say
bairsh kay bars anay say
phool khil hee jata hai !

lakin yeh maini jana hai

**khuwab kay azab main **

ger koi phass jayee

koi qabber nahi miltee

**jis main in ko dafnain **

**phir roo ker bhool jain **

**nahi aisa nahi hota **

**khuwab kabhi nahi mertay **

**saans kay niklany tak **

**azad yeh nahi kertay **

**jitna in ko dabaoo gay **

**utna phayltay jain gay **

**jitna in ko chupaoo gay **

**utna yeh or sattain gay **

khuwab ki nager main ger

chala jayee koi aik bar

**wapus kabhi nahi ata **

**rasta woh nahi pata **

**yeh azab der azab hay **

is main na tum kabhi ana

**na is main dil therta hay **

**na koi zkahum bherta hay **

na yaqeen ko der milta hay

**na koi phool khilta hay **

**khuwab chaltay jatay hain **

**derd berhtay jatay hain **

in ko kabhi bhi koi asra nahi milta !

jan 20 /04

Re: Khuwab kay azzab

very nice… :k:

yeh jo zindagi ki kitab hai
yeh kitab bhi kiya kitab hai
kahi ek haseen sa khawab hai
kahi par Jaan Lewaa azab hai

Re: Khuwab kay azzab

Boht khoob :flower1:

Re: Khuwab kay azzab

Good poetry

Re: Khuwab kay azzab

*Good.....Achi kaavish hai....Keep it up.....:) *

Re: Khuwab kay azzab

beautiful...............asar angaz.

Re: Khuwab kay azzab

:k:

Re: Khuwab kay azzab

thanx janab .. main apni like hoyee poem ik dafa say zyada nahi perh saktee .. lolzz

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yeh jo zindagi ki kitab hai
yeh kitab bhi kiya kitab hai
kahi ek haseen sa khawab hai
kahi par Jaan Lewaa azab hai

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assweetas> goodich

Re: Khuwab kay azzab

Yeh har chottay mottay sha’er ka common masla hay …:cb:

BTW ..buhat aala shairi hay aap ki koshish jari rakhain aap ki har problem slove ho jaeygee :flower1:

Re: Khuwab kay azzab

^ lolzz chotay or motay ..yeh dono to male hain : P

baee shaaire per mera koi irada nahi mazeed koshish ka ..ab hum haqeeqat pasand ho gayee hain : )

Re: Khuwab kay azzab

nice one PG thansk for sharing with us :)