*** khuwaaish…*** MEY NEY KHUDA SEY ISTEQAAMAT KI KHUWAAISH KI
US NEY MUJHEY MUSHKILAAT MEY DAAL DYA TAAKEY MEY UN KAA MUQAABLA KER SAKOON MEY NEY KHUDA SEY AASOODGI KI KHUWAAISH KI
US NEY MUJHEY AQAL AUR IKHTYAAR SEY NAWAAZ DYA TAAKEY MEY UNHEY KAAM MEY LAAOUN MEY NEY KHUDA SEY HIKMAT KI KHUWAAISH KI
US NEY MUJHEY MASAAIL SEY DO CHAAR KER DYA TAAKEY MEY TAJURBA HAASIL KARON
***MEY NEY KHUDA SEY ITMENAAn-E-QALB KI KHUWAAISH KI
US NEY MUJHEY PARESHAAN HAAL LOGO KI RAFAAQAT BAKSH DI TAAKEY MEY UN KI DIL Joiey *** KAROON
***MEY NEY KHUDA SEY AMN-O-AMAAN KI KHUWAAISH KI
US NEY MUJHEY HAQ KI BALA DSATI KEY LYAE KOSHAAN KER DYA TAAKEY ADL-O-INSAAF QAAIM HO *** SAKEY
***MEY NEY KUCH NAHI PAAYAA JIS KI MEY NEY KHUWAAISH KI
MUJHEY WOH SAB MIL GAYA JO MERI ZARURAT THI!! ***
central idea was taken from an english poem.hope u have liked it!!
Mera khiyal hy Amal nyMarna muhawry ky toor pr istymal kia hy agar shyr ko baqi ashaar sy alag kr ky daikhin tu Shyr Ka dosra Misra pehly ki nafi kr rha hy ky pehly kha ky mujhy meri khwahish nahi mili phir Zaroorat puri bhi ho gai tu matlab hy ky Khwahish puri ho gai Zaroorat ki takmeel ky liy hi Bnda Allah sy du akrta hy na MEY NEY KUCH NAHI PAAYAA JIS KI MEY NEY KHUWAAISH KI MUJHEY WOH SAB MIL GAYA JO MERI ZARURAT THI!! Magar jab puri Ghazal yah nazam ju bhi hy ikhati prhin tu kuch lagta hy ky bazoqat ham Allah sy shikwa krty hain hmari dua kionnahi puri hoi woh dua allah kisi or sorat main lota dyta hy.Ap ny yeh khny ki koshish ki hy.Nice try Though. BTW: Kia ap btan apasand frmain gi ky kis BEHR main ap ny yeh shairi ki hy???Shukriya
very baad dosto, kisi k jazbaat ka yoon mazak nahin uratey, unhon ney jo kuch apney dil pe mehsoos kiya wo kehney ki koshish ki hai, ab apni koshish mein wo kamyaab huey ya nahin ye alag bat hai,
and gn g, is ko aap na ghazal samjhen na nazam samjhen is ko aik waqia samajh lein jo salees urdu mein hamen parney ko mila
*Sorry Rani & Hans Mukh but these words i've already read on calendar ..... these are famous pharase and should be in intikhab or somewhere else ..... *
Yes he is right and Khuda gwah hy ky main ny mazaq nahi uraya,Waqiya hy agr tu reply main haq bnta tha Trajumy ko ham apni Nazam nahi kjh sakty. I guess
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