**KHUSHION PE HISAAR MERE PYAAR KA NAHI
TERI INAYATEN HO TO GAM BHI BURA NAHI
NEEDEN KHARAB KARTE HO KYON USKI YAAD ME
IZHAAR-E-HAAL KARNE KA JAB HAUSALA NAHI
MAINE TAMAAM UMR KIYA JISKA INTZAAR
USME KHULOOS-E-WAFA NAHI
KAISE KARE ILAAZ BHALA KOI
YE WO MARZ HAI JISKI DAWA NAHI
AISA NAHI KI KOI BHI TUJHSA NAHI
MAGAR KOI BHI KHWAAB ME TERE SIWA NAHI**
Re: Khushiyon pey hisaar
Nice one..
Per teesra aur chotha shair baqi ghazal ki behr aur wazan se kuch alag hi lag raha hai 
Re: Khushiyon pey hisaar
:k:
Re: Khushiyon pey hisaar
I agree muqawwe
Re: Khushiyon pey hisaar
yeah, Muqwee Bhaaii kaa Khayaal durust hai...AUR, aaKhirii she'r men mere Khayaal se lafz MAGAR ke bajaaye lafz LEKIN honaa chaahiye.
Ehsan saaHib nazar-e-saanii kar leN to bahtar hogaa. :)
Re: Khushiyon pey hisaar
nazer e saani ?
Re: Khushiyon pey hisaar
nazer e saani ?
nazar=to look; saanii = second time
...meaning...have a look again :) matlab...phir se original se check kar leN...bhool-chook door kar leN :p
Re: Khushiyon pey hisaar
yeah, Muqwee Bhaaii kaa Khayaal durust hai...AUR, aaKhirii she'r men mere Khayaal se lafz MAGAR ke bajaaye lafz LEKIN honaa chaahiye.
Ehsan saaHib nazar-e-saanii kar leN to bahtar hogaa. :)
Per ehsan uncle ne to sirf post kia hai.. unhon ne thodi hi likha hai
Re: Khushiyon pey hisaar
yeah, Muqwee Bhaaii kaa Khayaal durust hai...AUR, aaKhirii she'r men mere Khayaal se lafz MAGAR ke bajaaye lafz LEKIN honaa chaahiye.
Ehsan saaHib nazar-e-saanii kar leN to bahtar hogaa. :)
meray pass shair ka email nahin hai. :)
Re: Khushiyon pey hisaar
lol…tab Theek hai…langRaa she’r bhii chalegaa agar dauR na sake to lol 
Re: Khushiyon pey hisaar
Per ehsan uncle ne to sirf post kia hai.. unhon ne thodi hi likha hai
han vo to hai par kahiiN se to note kiyaa hogaa! :D