Khushiyon pey hisaar

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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**KHUSHION PE HISAAR MERE PYAAR KA NAHI
TERI INAYATEN HO TO GAM BHI BURA NAHI

NEEDEN KHARAB KARTE HO KYON USKI YAAD ME
IZHAAR-E-HAAL KARNE KA JAB HAUSALA NAHI

MAINE TAMAAM UMR KIYA JISKA INTZAAR
USME KHULOOS-E-WAFA NAHI

KAISE KARE ILAAZ BHALA KOI
YE WO MARZ HAI JISKI DAWA NAHI

AISA NAHI KI KOI BHI TUJHSA NAHI
MAGAR KOI BHI KHWAAB ME TERE SIWA NAHI**

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Re: Khushiyon pey hisaar

Nice one..

Per teesra aur chotha shair baqi ghazal ki behr aur wazan se kuch alag hi lag raha hai :hmmm:

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Re: Khushiyon pey hisaar

:k:

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Re: Khushiyon pey hisaar

I agree muqawwe :hmmm:

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Re: Khushiyon pey hisaar

yeah, Muqwee Bhaaii kaa Khayaal durust hai…AUR, aaKhirii she’r men mere Khayaal se lafz MAGAR ke bajaaye lafz LEKIN honaa chaahiye.

Ehsan saaHib nazar-e-saanii kar leN to bahtar hogaa. :slight_smile:

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Re: Khushiyon pey hisaar

nazer e saani ?

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Re: Khushiyon pey hisaar

nazar=to look; saanii = second time

…meaning…have a look again :slight_smile: matlab…phir se original se check kar leN…bhool-chook door kar leN :stuck_out_tongue:

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Re: Khushiyon pey hisaar

Per ehsan uncle ne to sirf post kia hai.. unhon ne thodi hi likha hai

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Re: Khushiyon pey hisaar

meray pass shair ka email nahin hai. :slight_smile:

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Re: Khushiyon pey hisaar

lol…tab Theek hai…langRaa she’r bhii chalegaa agar dauR na sake to lol :cb:

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Re: Khushiyon pey hisaar

han vo to hai par kahiiN se to note kiyaa hogaa! :smiley: