Khuda karey key ye sab mera guman nikley

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

sara_farooqui May 5, 2006, 4:24am 1

Merey khuda meri hasti ka imtehan nikley
Kisi terhan merey wajoob se yeh jan nikley
<O:p
Yeh be ghari ye zindagi ki akhri sazish
Khuda karey key ye sab mera guman nikley
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Phir is ke bad faqat sang zani honi hai
Bas aik bar ke chaukhat se dastna nikley

Aye khud fareb nazar aiytbar kia tera
Teri bahar hi aksar meri khizan nikley

Her zhakhm ka madawa kerta hai waqt ber haq
Jo khenjer dil mai ger jaye wo kahan nikley

Zamil May 5, 2006, 5:28am 2

Re: Khuda karey key ye sab mera guman nikley

Merey khuda meri hasti ka imtehaN nikley
Kisi terha merey wajoob se yeh jaN nikley

Phir is ke bad faqat sang zani honi hai
Bas aik bar ke chaukhat se dastnaN nikley

Aye khud fareb nazar aiytbar kia tera
Teri bahar hi aksar meri khizaN nikle
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Bohat zabardast bhaee....
Ab aaye ga na maza.....
Zara fiza kuch fankaaron ki fankaari se ma'moor hone lagi hai....
The one written in bold is excellent....
Thanx for sharing... :-)

being_lonely May 5, 2006, 7:30am 3

Re: Khuda karey key ye sab mera guman nikley

Merey khuda meri hasti ka imtehan nikley
Kisi terhan merey wajoob se yeh jan nikley

**kia kehnay hain bohat umda sara keep posting:)

<O:p

**

Sannan May 10, 2006, 10:46am 4

Re: Khuda karey key ye sab mera guman nikley

OH HOYEEEEEEEEE YA MERAY MALIK ...... YEH KIA LIKH DIA SARA GI NAY ....

ARAZ KIA HAY ...CHALO RAHNAY DAITAY HAIN ...

WAISY BARI TOUCHY SHA'R HAY AAP KI

sara_farooqui May 11, 2006, 3:48am 5

Re: Khuda karey key ye sab mera guman nikley

*Itna na Cherhaiye *

Khaloo_Khalil May 23, 2006, 11:26am 6

Re: Khuda karey key ye sab mera guman nikley

EH DUNYA RURDI JANDI EH
KITHEY BERA BANNEY LA RABBA
EH RAHI RAHON GHUSSEY NE
AAYE BALDI DE BOOTHEY NE
EH BANDEY TERE HI BANDEY NE
TU KUJ NA KUJ SAMJHA RABBA
EH DUNYA RURDI JANDI EH
KITHEY BERA BANNEY LA RABBA
EH BANDEY HAALAAN KHAKI NE
ASMAAN DI LAUNDEY TAKI NE
DOZAKH DI KHOLI TAKI NE
TU APPEY HI THANDI PA RABBA
EH DUNYA RURDI JANDI EH
KITHEY BERA BANNEY LA RABBA
JEHRI WAUTI HALAAN CHHUNNI SI
OUDI AJEY KAISRI CHUNNI SI
OUDI KOI MURAD NA PUNNI SI
OUDEY MEHNDI WALEY HATTHAAN NOO
LAMBAN DI PAINDI BHA RABBA
EH DUNYA RURDI JANDI EH
KITHEY BERA BANNEY LA RABBA
EH DUNYA RURDI JANDI EH......
EH DUNYA RURDI......
EH DUNYA.....
EH.....

saroo May 23, 2006, 12:17pm 7

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subhaan Allah subhaan Allah..........really really impressive scheme of thought....i had to double check if i was in Poet 1 or 2......really good

Prince_Ali May 24, 2006, 4:36pm 8

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:k:

Dilsay June 15, 2006, 2:45pm 9

Re: Khuda karey key ye sab mera guman nikley

Bohat dard hai is main.... phar kar agar asa mahsoos hota hai tu jis nay lekha hai wo kis azab say guzar giya hoo gee

twin_born June 15, 2006, 3:24pm 10

Re: Khuda karey key ye sab mera guman nikley

Hiii sara
how ru
where r u goen …
thts not fair yaar …yeh kyaa mazaaaaq haii yaaar hmmmm
just oneday u visit gs …
thn whole week rest …hmmmm

Bewafai June 16, 2006, 7:09am 11

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ohhh,,,, Dilsay, ji,, bas derd to derd walon ki hi samajh mai aata hai na,,, aahhh,,,, wesey shukriya

Bewafai June 16, 2006, 7:41am 12

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walekum Hi, Twin,
kia karain you know na busy busy people, no time, for, friends, proud ppl…
**wesey how are you??? **
kia ho raha hai aj kal??

decent_Felow June 26, 2006, 3:10pm 13

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hi sara
i m fine …nothing special
Khoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooot ALA shair hai
selection ka be jawab nahi app kaa