khud se door ho gaye hum

maria_d_great · October 13, 2009, 6:29am

ghurb hotey huway aftab ki manind

bichar ker usne tabiat udas ker dali

woh umer jis main hamien khud se milna tha

woh basar uski talash main ker dali

Sannan · October 13, 2009, 9:14am

Re: khud se door ho gaye hum

heart touching poetry .........

KKF · October 13, 2009, 9:24am

Re: khud se door ho gaye hum

nice but u need refining...Khayaal nazm kaa achchhaa hai...magar yeh talaash maHboob kii nahiIN Khud kii hotii to ziyaada behtar hotaa :) nice...keep trying :)

sarmad786 · October 13, 2009, 9:37am

Re: khud se door ho gaye hum

hehe,,,,ek or shayiar paida ho giya ....hehe

v v v nice

Shazia_Arif · October 13, 2009, 11:44am

Re: khud se door ho gaye hum

v nice bt mujhe aisa q lag raha hai k i heard it b4?