muddii
December 19, 2007, 5:37am
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Khud Dil Main Reh Kar Ankh Say Parda Karay Koi
Haan Lutf Jub Hai Paa Kay Bhee Dhoonda Karay Koi
Tum Nay Hukm e Tark e Tamana Suna Diya
Kis Dil Say Aaaaah Tark e Tamana Kary Koi
Duniya Laraz Gaiee Dil e Hirmaa~n Naseeb Key
Iss Tarah Saz e Aaish Na Chayra Karay Koi
Mujh Ko Yeh Aarzoo Woh Uthaain Niqab Khud
Unn Ko Yeh Intizaar Taqaza Karay Koi
Rangeeneay Niqab Main Gum Hoo Gaiee Nazar
Kiya Bay Hijabiyoon Ka Taqaza Karay Koi
Ya Tu Kisee Ko Jurat e Dedaar Hee Na Hoo
Ya Phir Mairee Nigah Say Deekha Karay Koi…aaaaaaah
Hoti Hai Iss Main Husn Key Toheen Aiy Majaz
Itna Na Ahel e Ishq Ko Ruswa Karay Koi
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Khud Dil Main Reh Kar Ankh Say Parda Karay Koi
Haan Lutf Jub Hai Paa Kay Bhee Dhoonda Karay Koi
Tum Nay Hukm e Tark e Tamana Suna Diya
Kis Dil Say Aaaaah Tark e Tamana Kary Koi
Rangeeneay Niqab Main Gum Hoo Gaiee Nazar
Kiya Bay Hijabiyoon Ka Taqaza Karay Koi
Ya Tu Kisee Ko Jurat e Dedaar Hee Na Hoo
Ya Phir Mairee Nigah Say Deekha Karay Koi…aaaaaaah
Hoti Hai Iss Main Husn Key Toheen Aiy Majaz
Itna Na Ahel e Ishq Ko Ruswa Karay Koi
veryyyy nice :k:
muddii
December 19, 2007, 7:34am
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Re: Khud Dil Main Reh Kar Ankh Say Parda Karay Koi…
Shukriya Passandeedgee Ka:)
padfoot
December 19, 2007, 1:48pm
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Re: Khud Dil Main Reh Kar Ankh Say Parda Karay Koi…
very nice :k:
Re: Khud Dil Main Reh Kar Ankh Say Parda Karay Koi.....
nicee :)
Aryaan
December 19, 2007, 5:44pm
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Re: Khud Dil Main Reh Kar Ankh Say Parda Karay Koi.....
Good One Muddii ...
Re: Khud Dil Main Reh Kar Ankh Say Parda Karay Koi.....
nice one muddi g :)
Re: Khud Dil Main Reh Kar Ankh Say Parda Karay Koi.....
*wallah muddi ji.....kya dilruba ghazal sunaiii!
kitni bechainiya samet kar ye ghazal likhi gayee hei!
*
muddii
December 24, 2007, 4:11am
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Re: Khud Dil Main Reh Kar Ankh Say Parda Karay Koi…
Thank u for liking:)
muddii
December 24, 2007, 4:14am
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Re: Khud Dil Main Reh Kar Ankh Say Parda Karay Koi.....
nicee :)
Thank u:)
muddii
December 24, 2007, 4:16am
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Re: Khud Dil Main Reh Kar Ankh Say Parda Karay Koi.....
Good One Muddii ...
Thank u Aryaan:)
Re: Khud Dil Main Reh Kar Ankh Say Parda Karay Koi.....
mukarer muddii.
nice thoughts. this polemic is not winsome over closed minds, though.
but, powerful it is.
best,
Dushwari
muddii
December 24, 2007, 4:20am
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Re: Khud Dil Main Reh Kar Ankh Say Parda Karay Koi.....
nice one muddi g :)
Adab arz hai NJ:)
muddii
December 24, 2007, 4:23am
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Re: Khud Dil Main Reh Kar Ankh Say Parda Karay Koi.....
wallah muddi ji.....kya dilruba ghazal sunaiii! **
**kitni bechainiya samet kar ye ghazal likhi gayee hei!
Sahee Farmaya JJW buhat he baychain Ghazal hai...................:)Adab Arz hai
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muddii
December 24, 2007, 4:26am
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Re: Khud Dil Main Reh Kar Ankh Say Parda Karay Koi.....
mukarer muddii.
nice thoughts. this polemic is not winsome over closed minds, though.
but, powerful it is.
best,
Dushwari
Thank u for liking and the comments Dushwarii:)
Re: Khud Dil Main Reh Kar Ankh Say Parda Karay Koi.....
the thought is really powerful, as you describe in not having to be assume the role of someone who is characterized to do the honors of fullfilling a false sense of contrived entitlement to do so.
human respect in relationships to anyone or any thing comes from being truly respectful in thought, in deeds and in expression. very good.
you're welcome for appreciation. your poem deserve it.
best,
Dushwari