khud apne wastey jeena bhi koi jeena hai

[bholibisri]

wOh bekhabar hai bakhabar kabhi nahin hota.
hamari baat ka jis par asar nahin hota

chiragh-e-hijar musalsal jalaye bethay hain
kabhi hawa ka udhar se guzar nahin hota

khud apne wastey jeena bhi koi jeena hai
safar yeh hAy’aat ka kion mukhtasar nahin hota

khud apne dais ki matti mera tashakhus hai
diyar-e-gair ka ghar apna ghar nahin hota

bholi yeh ishq ki soghat bhi ajab shai hai
yeh woh shajar hai jis ka samar nahin hota

[AQ]

Re: khud apne wastey jeena bhi koi jeena hai

khud apne dais ki matti mera tashakhus hai
diyar-e-gair ka ghar apna ghar nahin hota

:(

I like the last sher too.. looks like it is your own????

if it is, remember, next time, share your stuff in Sho'ara-e-Gupshup... :)

I will send a request to mods for now to move it to appropriate place, if you confirm it is yours...

Over here, in Intikhab, you can share the poetry of other poets ...

[deep_ocean]

Re: khud apne wastey jeena bhi koi jeena hai

yeh wo shajar hai jis ka samar nahin hota

samar to hota hi hai laikin baaz auqaat karwa hota hai

nice :k:

[Sheal]

Re: khud apne wastey jeena bhi koi jeena hai

nice sharing :)

[redidentity]

Re: khud apne wastey jeena bhi koi jeena hai

Wonderful.. :)