kho ker mujhe ye larki dukh se mar na jaye

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

aeno January 6, 2009, 7:34pm 1

**khushbu hai wo to chu k badan ko guzar na jaye
jab tak mere wajud k andar utar na jaye

khud phul ne bhi honth kiye apne nim-wa
chori tamam rang ki titli k sar na jaye

is khauf se wo sath nibhane k haq main hai
kho kar mujhe ye larki kahin dukh se mar na jaye

palkon ko us ki apne dupatte se ponch dun
kal k safar main aj ki gard-e-safar na jaye

main kis k hath bhejun use aj ki dua
qasid hawa sitara koi us k ghar na jaye**

parveen shakir

Heiress1 January 6, 2009, 8:18pm 2

Re: kho ker mujhe ye larki dukh se mar na jaye

v.nice..

Shab-e-Hijar January 6, 2009, 10:37pm 3

Nice :k:

Ahmi January 7, 2009, 7:39am 4

Re: kho ker mujhe ye larki dukh se mar na jaye

Nice aeno

aeno January 7, 2009, 10:28am 5

Re: kho ker mujhe ye larki dukh se mar na jaye

thnks heiress, shab n ahmi :)

shani January 7, 2009, 11:16am 6

v good...

but people do give up u kno...

aeno January 20, 2009, 5:09pm 7

Re: kho ker mujhe ye larki dukh se mar na jaye

thnks :)

Starlight January 23, 2009, 6:32pm 8

Nice!

aeno January 24, 2009, 10:05am 9

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thnks starlight :)

pk786 January 24, 2009, 9:18pm 10

Re: kho ker mujhe ye larki dukh se mar na jaye

is khauf se wo sath nibhane k haq main hai
kho kar mujhe ye larki kahin dukh se mar na jaye

kaaaaaaaaaaaaaaash har koi aise hee soche

very nice sharing

aeno January 25, 2009, 4:37am 11

Re: kho ker mujhe ye larki dukh se mar na jaye

pasand kerne ka shukriya :)