khilte gulabon se.

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Jane kon hum ko
hum se chura kar
Lekh layta hay
chand lafz mehakte,
khushboo se
Laho rang kuch zakhm ..
khilte gulabon se.
Hum khud bhi daikh ke hayran hon
Kabhi woh bhi to pashemaaN ho
Kuch to sila e ahd e paymaaN ho
Aay chashm e viraN
Koi to khwab utheray
Dil angan main ..
Tottay woh khwab phir se
aankhon main
Dhundla jay her manzar phir
kia zindagi kiya Ishq o janooN
Aik ansu hi ban jana hay …
Matthi main buss jana hay.

Adab

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Re: khilte gulabon se.

bohet achee nazm heye, Azad.
aik spelling mistake heye.
Dhundla jay her manzar phir
jey should be deye

best,
Dushwari

also, whose is this one liner?
Meray Roz O Shab k Nisaab Main Meray Paas Apna To Kuch Nahi

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Re: khilte gulabon se.

Nawazish ......correction ka shukriya.

dar-asal 4 mokhtalif ideas aik saat zehin main aa rahay the. bhalla ho tan asani ka 4 ka 1 ban gya.

adab.

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Re: khilte gulabon se.

nice thoughts.. randomizely arranged..

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Re: khilte gulabon se.

Nice :)

U didn't tell about ur quote. Plz do share the second *misraa *also.

Choor Don
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Tera Qarz Hain Meray Roz-o-Shab, Meray Paas Apna To Kuch Nahi
Meri Rooh Meri Mata-e-Fun Meri Saansain Teri Amanatain

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Re: khilte gulabon se.

^ Thanx, It has got a very deep meaning. I liked it.

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your welcome je.. yeah.. whole ghazal is beautiful..

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Re: khilte gulabon se.

Nawazish ..... pasand karne ka shukriya zara nawazi hay aap ki.

Shukriya Redidentidy shair post karne ka.

Humain pora shair yaad nahi, Ghalban Koyal ki kisi post se cut n paste kia tha. Bashir Badar ka Shair hay?.

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Re: khilte gulabon se.

v nice poem Azad auRaf hmmmmmmm :)

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Nikami Jee its.. hummmmm.. not hmmm :p

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Re: khilte gulabon se.

nahi jee.. no need to say thnx.. its my pleasure..

em sorry k i cannot confirm the poet's name.. but mujhe ghazal ka style Perveen Shakir ka sa lag raha hai.. magar i will confirm as soon as i get to know ab it :)

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hummm

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Meray Roz O Shab k Nisaab Main Meray Paas Apna To Kuch Nahi

Teraa Qarz Hay Meri Z|indagi... Meri Saansaain Teri Amaanatain...

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Re: khilte gulabon se.

fara: aap ne zehmat ki. nawazish

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Re: khilte gulabon se.

Wah Azad khub:k:

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chorrain goodnews ache zog walay bongi cheezon ki tareef nahi karte

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nice :k:

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nice 1 : )

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Nawazish Bheegy

Berhi_Bee Adab Welcome & Happy new year