Agar Be Faiz hai khud apne haq main
To phir badal barasta kis liye hai
Khilonay beechne wale ka beta
Khilonon ko tarasta kis liye hai
(Aitbar Sajid)
Re: Khilonay
Last line “Khilonon ko tarasta kis liye hai” taraswata nahi hona chahiye 
Re: Khilonay
:nahin: Barasta ka qafia tarasta hai… aur doosra shair khilona bechne walo ko nahin khilone beechne wale ke bache ke baare main hai. Taraswata daalne se puray shair per sakta pad jata, yani agar koi iss line ko gana chahta to ek saans main nahi ga sakta tha, jo ke ek ache shair ki khoobi hoti hai.
Re: Khilonay
Khilonay beechne wale ka beta
Khilonon ko tarasta kis liye hai
simply awesome