Khawahish

I orignally posted it in the poetry forum but noone even looked at it, (so i turned my attention seeking mood on and copy’pasted it here) it’s mine btw, so pass as many evil comments as you like.

ehsas ko zindagee atta karnay walay
meray chehray mayn rang bharnay walay
is chehray ko ab kuch naya atta kar
meray musawir mujhey sab sai juda kar

kuch anokhapan ho kuch munfarid sa bana
kai meray naseeb kharab sahee tu mujhhee ko baksh dai jila
meray ansoo pathar kai karday, meray qalm mayn zehar bhar dai
meri sanson ko aag kar, kar mujhey kuch tau atta.

meri khwahishayn baree shadeedsee, meri har ik zid ajeeb si
meri soch abhee pukhta naheen, tu hee koi mojaza dika
meri baaton mayn jaddo daal, ya mujh hee ko sehar kar dai
mujhey zindagee bakshanay waley, tu aisee koi qayamat kar dey

meray lafzon ko nikhar dai, meri soch ko sanwar dai
gar yeh mumkin naheen tau yeh chehraa phir sai be-rang kar dai.

yours truly

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P.S i don't have a sensitive side.

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:sleep:

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:rotato:

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:yawn:

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wow My wish its really good ..

its called burning poetry ....

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i don't feel like flooding in this thread ~

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mywish how buring are u kia mujh say bhi ziada :mad3:

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^dhamki........ post one more comment like that and i will post a 100 poems in the cafe, all the other threads will disappear.

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Good Poem. If you do not have any sensitive side, how have you written this poem?

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I wrote this poem with my hands , not the sensitive side. :)

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Do your hands work independent of your mind? I am amazed. :slight_smile:

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I am afraid yes. I believe in independence for all.

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I am afraid not. Human organs dont have this freedom and they should not have.