khawabooN k akas apnaY khud-o-khaal kho gaye

NikamiJano · February 24, 2003, 7:34pm

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gaRd is qadar hai aa’yena mah-o-saal peR
khawabooN k akas apnaY khud-o-khaal kho gaye

ankhooN k raang lay gaye taa’rooN ki roshni
chahrooN k naqash rait ki tahreeR ho gaye

takteY thay dil ki simt jo qaRnoo’N ki oO’at se
be-naam khawaishoon k wo mosam badal gaye***

Capricorn · February 24, 2003, 7:46pm

Re: khawabooN k akas apnaY khud-o-khaal kho gaye

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by NikamiJano: *

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gaRd is qadar hai aa'yena mah-o-saal peR
khawabooN k akas apnaY khud-o-khaal kho gaye

[/QUOTE]

Khwabon ke aks bhee dhundla gaye hain
Aa ke ab meree raatein udas ho gayee hain!

Abhee abhee likha hai...kaisa hai?;)

NikamiJano · February 24, 2003, 7:53pm

Re: Re: khawabooN k akas apnaY khud-o-khaal kho gaye

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Capricorn: *

Khwabon ke aks bhee dhundla gaye hain
Aa ke ab meree raatein udas ho gayee hain!

Abhee abhee likha hai...kaisa hai?;)
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din ko dekhnay waley khawbooN k akas tu dhundhla he jaiN gaiN
raatooN maiN na dhoondh hum tu ujaaloN main nazaR aien gaiN

hum ne be abhi abhi likha..:p

Capricorn · February 24, 2003, 8:01pm

Re: Re: Re: khawabooN k akas apnaY khud-o-khaal kho gaye

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by NikamiJano: *

din ko dekhnay waley khawbooN k akas tu dhundhla he jaiN gaiN
raatooN maiN na dhoondh hum tu ujaaloN main nazaR aien gaiN

hum ne be abhi abhi likha..:p
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Khwab to khwab hain, din mein parwan charhein ya raat mein
Chura na le in ko koi hum se bas yeh dua hai meree Rab se.

Hows dat? ;)

NikamiJano · February 24, 2003, 8:05pm

Re: Re: Re: Re: khawabooN k akas apnaY khud-o-khaal kho gaye

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Capricorn: *

Khwab to khwab hain, din mein parwan charhein ya raat mein
Chura na le in ko koi hum se bas yeh dua hai meree Rab se.

Hows dat? ;)
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khawab din ka ho ya ratoon ka ye tu toot he jaieN
dua mangi hia ye rub se teraY khawbooN maiN na aieN

:p

Capricorn · February 24, 2003, 8:13pm

Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: khawabooN k akas apnaY khud-o-khaal kho gaye

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by NikamiJano: *

khawab din ka ho ya ratoon ka ye tu toot he jaieN
dua mangi hia ye rub se teraY khawbooN maiN na aieN

:p
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Khwab neend ka la haasil safar hai, jaanta hoon
Tum na aana yahan ke yeh dil udas buhat hai :(

Capricorn · February 24, 2003, 8:41pm

Lagta hai mein yeh muqabla jeet gaya :D

chand_chehra · February 24, 2003, 10:04pm

Re: khawabooN k akas apnaY khud-o-khaal kho gaye

bohat khoob :k:
thanks for sharing

ullujii · February 24, 2003, 10:23pm

nice :)

Dragon_King · February 24, 2003, 10:26pm

Buhat Khoob Nikami :k:

_Passionate · February 24, 2003, 11:15pm

:)

Amal · February 25, 2003, 12:16am

Re: khawabooN k akas apnaY khud-o-khaal kho gaye

Beautiful NikamiJi:k:…aaj kal kahaaN hoti heiN aap?

weteyes82 · February 25, 2003, 1:52am

beautiful ...no doubt!
:)

Pramod · February 25, 2003, 6:30am

thanks for sharing this beautiful piece , bahna.
btw..ho sake to shaayar ka naam bhii likh diya kijiye...mujh jaise kam jaanane waale kam se kam ye to kah hii sakte hain ke maine es shaayar ko bhii padha hai.....

_Masoom_Muskaan · February 25, 2003, 1:44pm

Re: khawabooN k akas apnaY khud-o-khaal kho gaye

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by NikamiJano: *

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gaRd is qadar hai aa'yena mah-o-saal peR
khawabooN k akas apnaY khud-o-khaal kho gaye

ankhooN k raang lay gaye taa'rooN ki roshni
chahrooN k naqash rait ki tahreeR ho gaye

takteY thay dil ki simt jo qaRnoo'N ki oO'at se
be-naam khawaishoon k wo mosam badal gaye***
[/QUOTE]

its kool nikami jee :)

nikii · February 25, 2003, 2:14pm

zaberdast nikami sisoo :k:

NikamiJano · February 26, 2003, 1:38am

Re: Re: khawabooN k akas apnaY khud-o-khaal kho gaye

thanks CHando g …mish u kahan hain ap ..

NikamiJano · February 26, 2003, 1:40am

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by ullujii: *
nice :)
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tanks ULU g ..:)

NikamiJano · February 26, 2003, 1:52am

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by &Passionate: *
:)
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thanks Passion.....and ap came after long time...:)

NikamiJano · February 26, 2003, 1:55am

Re: Re: khawabooN k akas apnaY khud-o-khaal kho gaye

thanks Aymal…hmm kahan hotey… ** look who is talking **

tumhin jab kabi be milain fursataiN …hamin GS pe a k pukaaR lo..