Khawab............

[ASA]

**kuch talkh haqaiq they itnay,
kuch khawab he saary toot gae

Kuch khud bhe they afsurda se
kuch tum bhe hum se rooth gaye
kuch khud he zakhm k aadi they
kuch sheshay haath se choot gaye

kuch khud bhe they hassas bouhat,
kuch apne muqaddar rooth gaye
kuch khud itne muhtat na they,
kuch log bhe hum ko loot gaye

kuch talkh haqaiq they itnay,
kuch khawab he saary toot gae**

[GuL-e-Tasbeeh]

Re: Khawab............

Very nice :-)

[muncho]

Re: Khawab............

khwaab tau khwaab hee hotay
nice fluent poem

[SunnyBoy]

Re: Khawab…

:k:

[Koyal]

Re: Khawab............

nice and sweet :)

[deep_ocean]

Re: Khawab…

buhat khoob :k:

[redidentity]

Re: Khawab............

Awesome :)

[tum_bin_1]

Re: Khawab…

@AsSweetAs

**kuch talkh haqaiq they itnay, **
kuch khawab he saary toot gae

**Kuch khud bhe they afsurda se **
kuch tum bhe hum se rooth gaye
**kuch khud he zakhm k aadi they **
kuch sheshay haath se choot gaye

**kuch khud bhe they hassas bouhat, **
kuch apne muqaddar rooth gaye
**kuch khud itne muhtat na they, **
kuch log bhe hum ko loot gaye

**kuch talkh haqaiq they itnay, **
kuch khawab he saary toot gae

Zabardast :k:

[being_lonely]

Re: Khawab…

Nice Sharing Assweetas

[sunny_nicky]

Re: Khawab............

buhat khoobbb (f)

[bheegiyaad]

Re: Khawab............

VERY NICE

[Daanie]

Re: Khawab............

buhut khoob :)

[ASA]

Re: Khawab…

Thanks to all …

[ghazel_rizvi]

Re: Khawab............

nice one ASA bhai