khatm honay ko hai safar shaid

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

aabla_pa June 29, 2007, 5:05pm 1

khatm honay ko hai safar shaid
phir milein gay kabhi, magar shaid

phir mila izn-e-aabla-paee
phir bhatakna hai dar-badar shaid

ab k shab aankh mein utar aee
ab na dekhein gay hum sahar shaid

shehr mein roshni ka mela hai
jal gia phir kisi ka ghar shaid

being_lonely June 29, 2007, 5:10pm 2

Re: khatm honay ko hai safar shaid

SHAYAD
nice sharing asad :k:

deep_ocean June 29, 2007, 5:45pm 3

Re: khatm honay ko hai safar shaid

nice stuff :k:

redidentity June 29, 2007, 5:48pm 4

Re: khatm honay ko hai safar shaid

Superb..

SJ June 29, 2007, 5:49pm 5

Re: khatm honay ko hai safar shaid

Wah!!!!!!!!!!
Bohat Khoob!!!
:)

case_study June 29, 2007, 5:52pm 6

Re: khatm honay ko hai safar shaid

man, you got feelings. nice poem bro.

Jhanjharewali June 30, 2007, 2:44pm 7

Re: khatm honay ko hai safar shaid

very powerful aabla_pa ji. probably one of ur bestest.