Khatam honey ko hai safer shayed

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Khatam honey ko hai safer shayed
Phir milein gey kabhi, mager shayed

Phir mila izn-e-aabla paai
Phir bhatakna hai darbadar shayed

Ab k shab aankh mein utar aai
Ab na deikhein gey hum seher shayed

Sheher mein roshni ka meila hai
Jal gaya phir kisi ka ghar shayed

(Mohsin Naqvi)
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Re: Khatam honey ko hai safer shayed

kia baat hai naqwi sahab ki ....
beautiful poem
thankyou jee

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:hat:

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achi lagi ya buri lagi hum ko ye nazm shyad
soch kar bataen ge kal nahin to parson shayad

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Koi gal ni aysi..............i m w8ing............:)

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Third line ka koe tarjuma karega plz.

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izn = hukm, aabla pai = paon main chaale padna (means mushkil safar ka hukm milna)

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Thanks :)

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Do the first 6 lines in any way point towards death...or is it just me who thinks that ?

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mayusi

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Re: Khatam honey ko hai safer shayed

But it can be understood as pointing towards death.Can't it ?

Mayosi sirf iska ishara death k taraf samajhne se ? Ye poem tou kisi bhi form mai sad he hai. Nai ?