mujh ko taqdeer k hathoN se mila kuch b nahi
aur taqdeer nay mujh ko dia kuch b nahi
hath thamo to sitaroon ko jhuka saktay hain
warna hathooN may lakeeroN k siwa kuch b nahi
iska matlab hai k majboor bohat hain wo b
khali kaghaz mujhay aya hai likha kuch b nahi
apnay har ashk may tum mujko munakkas kar k
ye samjhtay ho k dunya ko pata kuch b nahi
teri yadoon k saharay hain zinda warna
jeevaN may our is dil may bacha kuch b nahi
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mujh ko taqdeer k hathoN se mila kuch b nahi
aur taqdeer nay mujh ko dia kuch b nahi
pitaai lagni chaheay taqdeer kee tu, itna zulm.
PS: Nice sharing. :k:
taqdeer nay mujh ko taqdeer ka mara bana dala… ghazal yaad agaye ye 
Nice sharing :k:
Re: khali kaghaz mujhay aya hai likha kuch b nahi
teri yadoon k saharay hain zinda warna
*jeevaN may our is dil may bacha kuch b nahi
zabardast jee
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teri yadoon k saharay hain zinda warna jeevaN may our is dil may bacha kuch b nahi ** ** ** ** ** ** **
Beauful choice as always, how are you???????
Re: khali kaghaz mujhay aya hai likha kuch b nahi
very nice
Unparh say tanka laraya hoga jo kora kaghaz mila :)
Re: khali kaghaz mujhay aya hai likha kuch b nahi
very touchy
Re: khali kaghaz mujhay aya hai likha kuch b nahi
Nice sharing. :k:
mujh ko taqdeer k hathoN se mila kuch b nahi aur taqdeer nay mujh ko dia kuch b nahi
hath thamo to sitaroon ko jhuka saktay hain warna hathooN may lakeeroN k siwa kuch b nahi
iska matlab hai k majboor bohat hain wo b khali kaghaz mujhay aya hai likha kuch b nahi
apnay har ashk may tum mujko munakkas kar k ye samjhtay ho k dunya ko pata kuch b nahi
teri yadoon k saharay hain zinda warna jeevaN may our is dil may bacha kuch b nahi
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aadaab Koyal Ji,
ummeed hai k mizaaj baKahir hoNge :)
aapkaa intiKhaab nazar nawaab huaa aur bahaot pasand bhii aayaa. share karne ke liye shukria aapkaa.
ab waah ke saath kuchh aah bhii sun lijiye...lol
aapne likhaa lafz "munakkas" jo k dar asl hai "munaqqash" jo k lafz naqsh se banaa hai
last she'r "out of meter" hai. mere Khayaal se she'r ko kuchh yuN honaa chaahiye:
terii yaadoN ke sahaare HI haiN zinda, varna
jism meN aur mire dil meN bachaa kuchh bhii nahiiN
nazr-e-saanii kar lijiyegaa. navaazish
Allah Haafiz
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iska matlab hai k majboor bohat hain wo b
khali kaghaz mujhay aya hai likha kuch b nahi*
Maira Khaya Hay Miss Letter Aaya Ho Ga** **
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Re: khali kaghaz mujhay aya hai likha kuch b nahi
teri yadoon k saharay hain zinda warna
jeevaN may our is dil may bacha kuch b nahi
Wah very nice.
Waisay khaali kagaz iss liye aaya hoga kay shayad usay likhna na aata ho. :D
Re: khali kaghaz mujhay aya hai likha kuch b nahi
lol ehsan
teri yadoon k saharay hain zinda warna jeevaN may our is dil may bacha kuch b nahi
Wah very nice.
Waisay khaali kagaz iss liye aaya hoga kay shayad usay likhna na aata ho. :D
Does it mean you are next Asif Ali Zardari????????
Re: khali kaghaz mujhay aya hai likha kuch b nahi
kia khoobsoorat kalaam hai...dil ko chhu lenay wali shayiri hai
Bohat khoob Koyal..:)
Beauful choice as always, how are you???????
Thanks am fine and ap kahaN hotey :)
aadaab Koyal Ji,
ummeed hai k mizaaj baKahir hoNge :)
aapkaa intiKhaab nazar nawaab huaa aur bahaot pasand bhii aayaa. share karne ke liye shukria aapkaa.
ab waah ke saath kuchh aah bhii sun lijiye...lol
aapne likhaa lafz "munakkas" jo k dar asl hai "munaqqash" jo k lafz naqsh se banaa hai
last she'r "out of meter" hai. mere Khayaal se she'r ko kuchh yuN honaa chaahiye:
terii yaadoN ke sahaare HI haiN zinda, varna jism meN aur mire dil meN bachaa kuchh bhii nahiiN
nazr-e-saanii kar lijiyegaa. navaazish
Allah Haafiz _______Hashmat <!--Session data-->
shukria :
likha ap ne kuch itna k
samj maiN aya kuch b nahi :p
teri yadoon k saharay hain zinda warna jeevaN may our is dil may bacha kuch b nahi
Wah very nice.
Waisay khaali kagaz iss liye aaya hoga kay shayad usay likhna na aata ho. :D
likhna tu ata tha lakiN na likhnay waloon k leay rakh chora aur wo likh gaye :p
Thanks kesay haiN ap ehsan g :)