khalee jegha

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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khiyal keye bendhen meye jo bendha tha
wohh ubb khood hee seye het sa chuka heye

ehsas keye tarazoo meye jo bahem tula tha
wohh ubb yoon hee gheth sa chuka heye

baa-wafaee ka peiker jo mujasim paya tha
wohh ubb achanek chup ho sa chela heye

hemdard dost o dil sa jo beye-punha lega tha
wohh rishteye meye ubb la-taluk bhena heye

kem na honeye ka kabhee tha jis ka yakeen
wohh sareye ka sara ubb nahi betcha heye

kadroon kee paheilaa ka jo metleb jana tha
wohh wohh ubb weisa nahi raha heye

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Re: khalee jegha

ehsas keye tarazoo meye jo bahem tula tha
wohh ubb yoon hee gheth sa chuka heye

acha khayal hay; nice effort
thanks and regards :)

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Re: khalee jegha

mucho, where are your poems?
did you write any recently?

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Re: khalee jegha

yaar apki wordings i dnt know y muje bilkul samaj nhi aati...words clear nhi hote...urdu ko eng men is tarha se likha karen k easily samaj aa jae......

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me never posted here my tuk-bundee here, niether succeeded to gather words in any form of poetry, umm lets try if u say:
mun ki bunjar khaiytee se soach ka daman bhee veeraan hua
bikharay lafz, uljhee soachain, likhtay huay qalam bhee hairan hua

to be continued.... hehehehe

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multi-nicking is pretty obvious.
all the best,

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Re: khalee jegha

thanx for sharin

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Re: khalee jegha

you're welcome, rabiee.

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Re: khalee jegha

nice but it is difficult to read....but really nice :)