khabar milay gi mai MAR gaya.........


Tera Dard Tha,
teri aas thi,
mai jider gaya
mai jahan gaya
mera din to yunhi guzar gaya,
yunhi shaam hoie mai bikhar gaya
is aber ka meray yaar say,
kitna milta julta mizaaj tha,
kabi tooot kar bars gaya,
kabi bay-rukhi say guzar gaya
koi baaat b na keh saka,
bus thorhi dair ka sath tha,
wo mila raat khawab mai,
junhi subah hoie bicher gaya
jab chorh doon ga mai wo gali,
usay yaad aiay ge tab meri,
wo dhonday ka mujay gali gali
aor
khabar milay gi mai MAR gaya…

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Welcome Back Imran :)

and what a come back with a simple yet effective poetry...

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welcome back Imran :k:

abb cafe may bhi ajana:naraz:

Re: khabar milay gi mai MAR gaya.........

teek tha -

joh maza kissi ki judai mey jeenai ka hai marnai mai kaha.

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Nice Nice

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well iahve read ur nazam and its marvellous…i dont know whether its your own or its written by some other poet but its truly TOO GOOOOD>>>

keep it up

i am a new member joined yesterday

:slight_smile:

Re: khabar milay gi mai MAR gaya.........

nice poetry.

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buhat khoob

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Thanks AQ bahi :slight_smile:

**Thanks EMM masssi **
kyo waha par aap nay apni MODship dikhani hay kaya :stuck_out_tongue:

**yea poet bichara judaiee bardashat karnay ke salahiyat nai rakhta ho ga :bummer: **

Thanks :slight_smile:

**First of all welcome to GS especially welcome to poetry section :slight_smile: hope u will enjoy :slight_smile: **
**its not mine and i dont know about the poet infact i got this lil piece of poetry through SMS :slight_smile: **
**Thanks for liking :slight_smile: **

**Sukriya :slight_smile: **

Thanks :slight_smile:

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THANX FOR SHARING SUCH A BEAUTIFUL POEM!

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*^ Always Welcome and Thanks for liking :-) *