kesa maftooh sa manzar hai kae sadion say

ghazal_kisi_ke · May 4, 2003, 4:17am

***kesa maftooh sa manzar hai kae sadion say meray qadmon pe mera sar hai kae sadion say

khof rehta hai salaab na kaheen lay jayay
mere palkon pe tera ghar hai kae sadion say

is kay panee mein bhi pehlay sa woh tehrao nahi
to bhi bechain samander hai kae sadion say

ashk aankhon mein sulgtay hoay soo jatay hain
yeh mere ankh jo banjar hai kae sadion say

kon kehta hai mulaqat mere aaj ke hai
to mere rooh ke ander hai kae sadion say**

yeh mujhe sans bhi kohl ke nahi lanay deta
mere shah rag pe jo kanjar hai kae sadion say

ay mere maan mein her aik dohp se lar sakta hoon
meray sar pe tere chadar hai kae sadion say

**mein ne jis ke liya her saks ko naraz kia
roth jayay na yehee dar hai kae sadion say

is ke adat hai jaray kat-tay rehnay ke wase
jo mere zaat ka mehwar hai kae sadion say***

XChorniX · May 4, 2003, 4:56am

very nice :k:

chand_chehra · May 4, 2003, 6:31am

Re: kesa maftooh sa manzar hai kae sadion say

bohat khoob :k:

Galaxy · May 4, 2003, 4:38pm

nice

HeArT_HaCKeR · May 4, 2003, 6:45pm

:k: bohat khooooooob

system · May 4, 2003, 7:00pm

Nice :k::k:

ghazal_kisi_ke · May 5, 2003, 3:55am

XChorniX, chand_chehra, Galaxy, HeArT HeCKeR and Vivacious thanks for liking:flower1:

Gadha · May 5, 2003, 5:23am

Re: kesa maftooh sa manzar hai kae sadion say

Gymnastic:smack: Lahola wala Quwat:rolleyes:

Dilsay · May 5, 2003, 6:00am

Re: kesa maftooh sa manzar hai kae sadion say

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by ghazal kisi ke: *

**kesa maftooh sa manzar hai kae sadion say
meray qadmon pe mera sar hai kae sadion say

khof rehta hai salaab na kaheen lay jayay
mere palkon pe tera ghar hai kae sadion say

is kay panee mein bhi pehlay sa woh tehrao nahi
to bhi bechain samander hai kae sadion say

ashk aankhon mein sulgtay hoay soo jatay hain
yeh mere ankh jo banjar hai kae sadion say

kon kehta hai mulaqat mere aaj ke hai
to mere rooh ke ander hai kae sadion say**

yeh mujhe sans bhi kohl ke nahi lanay deta
mere shah rag pe jo kanjar hai kae sadion say

ay mere maan mein her aik dohp se lar sakta hoon
meray sar pe tere chadar hai kae sadion say

**mein ne jis ke liya her saks ko naraz kia
roth jayay na yehee dar hai kae sadion say

is ke adat hai jaray kat-tay rehnay ke wase
jo mere zaat ka mehwar hai kae sadion say*

**
[/QUOTE]

Each and every words is well said thanks for sharing....

Sadiyoon ka safar tay kar kay aya tha woo
Tunay jis shaksh ko mur kar nahi dekha...

Azad · May 5, 2003, 6:19am

khoob :k:

Nazam · May 5, 2003, 9:51am

Nice one didi

Azad · May 5, 2003, 11:52am

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Nazam: *
Nice one didi
[/QUOTE]

GKKK didi hummm

ghazal_kisi_ke · May 5, 2003, 8:51pm

Re: Re: kesa maftooh sa manzar hai kae sadion say

ap apnay chotay se demakh per itna zor mat do kionke apko achay aur zara muskel sher samhaj mein nahi atay:p:p

azad thanks:)
nazam thanks sis:)

ghazal_kisi_ke · May 5, 2003, 8:53pm

Re: Re: kesa maftooh sa manzar hai kae sadion say

thanks and u welcome:)
and thanks for the sher:k:

Gadha · May 5, 2003, 10:43pm

Re: Re: Re: kesa maftooh sa manzar hai kae sadion say

aap ko sherouN ka matlab hee samajh nahiN aayaa, jo humm nay bataayaa:D sher tau dooor kee baat hay aap kay liye:p

ghazal_kisi_ke · May 6, 2003, 12:59am

Re: Re: Re: Re: kesa maftooh sa manzar hai kae sadion say

whatever:sleep2: