Keh do ab yaad sey apni zara aaraam se aa!!

Lamhay · January 30, 2003, 6:35pm

keh do ab yaad sey apni zara aaraam sey aa
aur furqat sey na ab kaash intiqaam sey aa

ho na ruswai teri meri aqeedat sey sanam
gar che aana hai to aadat meri gumnaam sey aa

kyoon churaata hai too nazrain tishna main kub se khara
peeney waala naheen mudhosh bhare jam sey aa

hijar ki raat tawaalat ki hai mashhoor bohat
dard se mujh ko bachaa ley too sar-e-shaam sey aa

guzarey saalon ke woh gul pheekey hameesha they zara
ab baharan tujhey aana hai to us naam sey aa

ishq kay haj main ibaadat zara aashiq kar le
usko aik baar ye keh dey “abhi ihraam sey aa”

log aate hain meri qabar pey rakh jaain woh phool
tujh ko aana hai to aa jaa par ihteraam sey aa

phir ye bekaari-o-ghaflat pey tula baittha hai
dil lagaana bhi to aik kaam hai us kaam sey aa

ghar banaa ley tu hameesha ka na ho aarzee phir
ab utar ja tu meray dil main ihtimaam sey aa

kya mila mujh ko lagaane ka ye dil tujh sey haseen?
Ehad-o-paimaan ko kar poora tu in’aam sey aa

qaida koi naheen us ki tu shorash main Lamhay
keh dey “dil torney aaya tu intizaam sey aa” !!!

Dilsay · January 30, 2003, 6:38pm

Re: Keh do ab yaad sey apni zara aaraam se aa!!

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Lamhay: *
keh do ab yaad sey apni zara aaraam sey aa
aur furqat sey na ab kaash intiqaam sey aa

ho na ruswai teri meri aqeedat sey sanam
gar che aana hai to aadat meri gumnaam sey aa

kyoon churaata hai too nazrain tishna main kub se khara
peeney waala naheen mudhosh bhare jam sey aa

hijar ki raat tawaalat ki hai mashhoor bohat
dard se mujh ko bachaa ley too sar-e-shaam sey aa

guzarey saalon ke woh gul pheekey hameesha they zara
ab baharan tujhey aana hai to us naam sey aa

ishq kay haj main ibaadat zara aashiq kar le
usko aik baar ye keh dey "abhi ihraam sey aa"

log aate hain meri qabar pey rakh jaain woh phool
tujh ko aana hai to aa jaa par ihteraam sey aa

phir ye bekaari-o-ghaflat pey tula baittha hai
dil lagaana bhi to aik kaam hai us kaam sey aa

ghar banaa ley tu hameesha ka na ho aarzee phir
ab utar ja tu meray dil main ihtimaam sey aa

kya mila mujh ko lagaane ka ye dil tujh sey haseen?
Ehad-o-paimaan ko kar poora tu in'aam sey aa

qaida koi naheen us ki tu shorash main Lamhay
keh dey "dil torney aaya tu intizaam sey aa" !!!!
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Lamhay jee this is the best posting i have ever seen... great i have no words to say anything.... **

Pyara_sa_doost · January 30, 2003, 6:47pm

wow very nice

wah wah bohat kohb kaha

keh do ab yaad sey apni zara aaraam sey aa
aur furqat sey na ab kaash intiqaam sey aa

good choice

bohat kohb

Azad · January 30, 2003, 6:49pm

Re: Keh do ab yaad sey apni zara aaraam se aa!!

Excellent :k: bhai aap to chupay rustum niklay .. thanks for sharing

waisay aik baat bata’tay chalain, hum Azad hain apni marzi say aain gay our apni marzi say jain gay .. chahay aap kuch bhi kaho

Azad · January 30, 2003, 6:51pm

Such a feminine thought …

chand_chehra · January 30, 2003, 7:16pm

Nice1 :k:

HeArT_HaCKeR · January 30, 2003, 8:44pm

:k: bohat achi hai

system · January 30, 2003, 8:48pm

bohat khoob, really beautiful :k:

ghazal_kisi_ke · January 31, 2003, 5:05am

:k::k::k::k::k:
each sher is perfect

Lamhay · January 31, 2003, 11:41am

Re: Re: Keh do ab yaad sey apni zara aaraam se aa!!

o dilsay ji main is kabil kahan !!
per nawazish hai aap ki kay aap nay pasand kia aur bahut zayeda pasand kiya warna aisi daad kahan naseeb hoo har aik ki kismaat main!

Lamhay · January 31, 2003, 11:44am

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Pyara sa doost: *
wow very nice

wah wah bohat kohb kaha

keh do ab yaad sey apni zara aaraam sey aa
aur furqat sey na ab kaash intiqaam sey aa

good choice

bohat kohb
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thanks doost ji shukriyaa aap ka !!

Lamhay · January 31, 2003, 11:45am

Re: Re: Keh do ab yaad sey apni zara aaraam se aa!!

bhai?? bhai nahin behen

ji malooom hain aap azad panchi hain yahan tu sab hi azaadi pasand kartay hain !

Lamhay · January 31, 2003, 11:46am

Shukriya chandoo , vivacious and Heart hacker sweeto!

Lamhay · January 31, 2003, 11:47am

ghazal thanks for the appreciation sweetoo!!!

Capricorn · January 31, 2003, 12:02pm

Beautiful :k:

Azam_1 · January 31, 2003, 12:37pm

Masha Allah bohot hi khoob :k: :k:

Flooding karney ke saath saath aap to likhti bhi bohot acha hain

Azad · January 31, 2003, 5:17pm

Re: Re: Re: Keh do ab yaad sey apni zara aaraam se aa!!

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Lamhay: *

bhai?? bhai nahin behen ;)

ji malooom hain aap azad panchi hain yahan tu sab hi ** azaadi pasand kartay hain **!
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maghar Azad nahi hain

Lamhay · February 2, 2003, 10:25am

shukriya capricorn ji !!

Lamhay · February 2, 2003, 10:26am

lolzz acha ji meharbani aap ki !!